http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aLetter+of+MotivationSearch results for 'tag:Letter of Motivation' matching tag 'Letter of Motivation'en-USXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterMotivationStudyUsa/lrxzv/post.htmWed, 30 Sep 2009 06:38:45 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:922866melee3000Hello Everyone, this is my motivation letter to study abroad in the USA Could somebody please read my letter and give me some feedback about it. Could you also tell me the proper font to use? I am currently using arial 12 Thanks. : ) Dear Sir/madam, I am a twenty year old student at the Universidad of *** in Mexico. I am majoring in physics on my 5th semester. I have decided to study abroad for the spring 2009 semester at the University of ***. To study physics, one needs to be prepared with a variety of tools and full of curiosity. It is a demanding and time consuming field, but the payoff is worth it. The opportunity to increase your understanding of the physical universe should make any person exited. To achieve this, I have...http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterOfMotivationToPhd/jbmzx/post.htmMon, 01 Jun 2009 14:08:16 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:760169llorenziPlease, I need a hand with my letter of motivation to apply for a Ph D Program. Could you help me to correct orthography and other things you think it could sound better? Thank you! I am writing to express my interest in applying for the PhD program in the University of Trento. I was born 25 years ago in Bressanone, a little city in South Tyrol, where most of the people speaks only German; so from my infancy I started to learn a bit of German. After the normal school, I studied Telecommunications Engineering, from 2002 to 2008, at the University of Trento, where I obtained first a bachelor's degree and after the master's degree. During my studies, I was sometime a curious student because I knew that to pursue a scientific...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReviewMotivationLetter-InternshipFinishWeek/wnpln/post.htmMon, 18 May 2009 20:49:41 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:736572feuerfreireplayBla, bla, bla With this letter I would like to explain my motivation for an internship at your company. I graduated from Technical University of Moldova; Computers, Informatics and Microelectronics Faculty in July 2007 where I obtained a degree in Informational Technologies. I enjoy Programming because I considered it as it were an intellectual game; I like this kind of quizzes. And there is also the fascinating possibility to work from anywhere as I like very much to travel The opportunity to work within several foreign offshore companies, with complete different environments and cultures confirmed my decision to work abroad. As I am interested in other countries, people and the way they are doing business. After having researched...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ConsiderLetterMotivation/wzvcx/post.htmFri, 03 Apr 2009 11:17:09 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:693937derolandNormal 0 21 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 Dear members of this board, i'm currently working on my letter of motivation for a dutch university; the roosevelt academy of middelburg. I feel that it's going in the right direction but would like some insights on my use of english and perhaps the general tone of my letter. I used the following topic as a guideline for the structure; http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterUtrechtUniversity-Holland/krhk/post.htm any insights or suggestions are very welcome! The letter; Normal 0 21 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to apply for the Roosevelt Academy Honours programme starting in...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/wvgml/post.htmMon, 23 Mar 2009 02:04:10 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:689769jdanielsHello, I wrote this letter for international studies..I'd be very thankful if somebody could correct grammar and style in this letter. Thank you in advance :) I have always been fascinated about computer impact in our daily life. In this twenty first century no business organization can imagine its existance without computer related systems. I believe that as years go by this impact will become more and more significant not only in business organizations but also in everyone‘s life. I am convinced this degree would provide me with all the necessary information and skills I need to build an attractive career opportunity in my life and become a really competent specialist in computer science. I have decided to relate my life with...http://www.englishforums.com/English/AplicationBusinessSchoolLetter-Motivation/wdklh/post.htmThu, 12 Mar 2009 18:56:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:685991lazyworkaholicHello, I am currently writing my letter of motivation for a European business school and could need some help with grammar and sentence constructions. I think my sentences are often way too long and complicated but it's hard for me to write them short with the same information. I am also a little bit confused about the punctuation marks "," and where to use them in English language. Here's the first part of my draft. Dear Madam or Sir, herby I would like to apply for the Bachelor's programme in International Business at *** Business School. After my graduation from high school in 2006, I have worked 11 months at the 'Versorgungsanstalt des Bundes und der Länder', the German governmental annuity...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/2/hhwpz/Post.htm#679927Wed, 25 Feb 2009 13:11:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:679927otto4uNormal 0 false false false EN-US X-NONE X-NONE (Appropriate subject, for e.g. Sub: - Application for IB Diploma program) I would like to apply for a scholarship from International Baccalaureate in Diploma programme. I have learnt about it at in an educational fair and became determined to apply. I have always craved to achieve first-class education which made me to think about IB programme as the prior step to assist me in achieving my goal. I have analyzed my achievements and I affirm they meet the requirements of the programme. To start with, I attended school №1270 (please mention the name rather than no.s) in Moscow that specializes in...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/hhwpz/post.htm#679922Wed, 25 Feb 2009 12:59:40 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:679922otto4uNormal 0 false false false EN-US X-NONE X-NONE (Appropriate subject, for e.g. Sub: - Application for IB Diploma program) With this letter, (we might not need it) I would like to apply for a scholarship to from International Baccalaureate in Diploma programme. I have learnt about it at in an educational fair and got very concerned about it and became determined to apply. I’ve spent a lot of time thinking about my future education and career. I’ve made up my mind that I really want to get a first-class education and I consider the IB programme as a step that will help me achieve my goal. I have always craved to achieve first-class education which...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/hhwpz/post.htm#670683Thu, 12 Feb 2009 13:59:31 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:670683afrimplease help i need to replay as short as possible in two questiones, what do you think about this? description of motivation: Since 1998 I’ve been working in different organizations on a various projects. From the very beginning I was fascinated with the projects’ magnitude and importance for the society and I was proud to work in those projects. It is rewarding to see the ideas outlined in the initial project papers convert into reality, and to realize that I am a part of this process. Recently I’m deeply involved in drafting and implementation of various projects for the regional center were I feel urge to get better insight into advanced project cycle management. Accomplishing this advanced training will enable me to achieve a broader...http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpProofreadMotivationLetter/wrhjk/post.htmThu, 12 Feb 2009 04:37:22 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:670354cindygutihi guys, i'm from china. i gonna apply for admission of the Erasmus University Rotterdam. could you please help me proofread my motivation letter? thanks so much!!! motivation letter Dear Madam or Sir, I am hereby applying for entrance for the International business administration program at the Erasmus University Rotterdam (EUR) in September 2009.In the following letter I will explain why I think that the EUR is the ideal university for me. First of all I would like to start with information regarding my background. I was raised in a small town called kaifeng, situated in the middle part of China. When I was 10, my parents made me come into contact with english. Later, in the school, I realised that I was a quick learner...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MasterProgrammeMotivation-Letter/hpncr/post.htmTue, 03 Feb 2009 22:15:13 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:662133katlego oliphantHi all! Im new to this and Im loving it! Im from South Africa and my English is not that good. Please help me with the motivation letter to get acceptance for a scholarship to do my Masters. Thank you in advance.This is what I have written: Normal 0 false false false EN-US X-NONE X-NONE MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 Dear Scholarship Officer I would like to apply for the Full Time Post Graduate Scholarship programme for the period of 2009-2010. I have completed my Diploma in Adventure Tourism Management and my B-Tech Degree in Tourism Management at the Tshwane University of Technology. Through my years of studying at TUT, I have witnessed that it’s a...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CoverLetterCorrection/hxvll/post.htmMon, 26 Jan 2009 20:03:41 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:654783florianPlease could anyone check briefly my cover letter and propose some corrections??? Thanks in advance.. Dear Sir or Madam With this letter I want to express my interest in doing an internship at *** Trough my current work as an intern at ***, a leading ** economic research and consultancy institute, I got in touch with your products and your work, which caught immediately my attention. In October 2008, I graduated with a Bachelor of Science in Economics from the University ** . Before I will continue my educational path at university with a Master program in Economics next September, I would like to gain practical experiences in the field of economic research and bring in my theoretical knowledge into daily...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/hhwpz/post.htmThu, 25 Dec 2008 20:04:03 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:621610otto4uDate: - Please correct my letter if there are any mistakes. I will be very thankful to you. Dear Sir/Madam, Sub: - Requesting Admission My name is ** and I have done my High School and received Senior Secondary School Certificate from **,**. I would like to apply for an Undergraduate program in Mechanical Engineering at **. I have a very good command of English language but require training in Dutch language to pursue. I have always aspired to become an engineer to revolutionize the world with my knowledge. Today we take or use most of over everyday objects for granted whichttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMotivationLetterUnivs-Sweden/hggqh/post.htmSat, 20 Dec 2008 16:58:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:616138aceshark123this is my first attempt at writing a motivation letter so please help me & check  my letter. i would be very grateful if u could show the things that need correction. its a bit urgent.so help!! MOTIVATION LETTER   I am Venkataraman. N, 23 years of age, an Indian. I am applying for the Master’s Program in Nuclear Engineering and Automotive Engineering in Sweden. I am a final year student in Sri Sairam Engineering College (Anna University), Chennai, Tamil Nadu, India of Bachelor of Engineering in Mechanical Engineering.   In my university studies I learnt the fundamentals of technical engineering and the experience and knowledge that came with it. At the end of my second year, I found my interests in Automobile systems and...http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterMotivation/hgczh/post.htmFri, 19 Dec 2008 06:10:12 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:614795carlitosc85Hi Im Carlos, from Ecuador. I am now applying for a master's programme in International Business. I have never written a motivation letter before so could someone please help me to revise it? Please check both substance and form mistakes, because English is not my native language. Thanks a lot... Here it is: Dear Sir or Madame: I hereby take this opportunity to express my most fervent desire to be taken into account to be part of your most prestigious university. I am applying to the Master’s in *** program for the period 2009/2010. Please allow me to briefly introduce myself, I am a young Ecuadorian professional, I have graduated from the university of: __, in Guayaquil, Ecuador, majoring in International Business and...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseMotivationLetterErasmusCourse/hvxjb/post.htmMon, 08 Dec 2008 18:52:47 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:608499mauriciolHello there. I found some guides in this forum that were very helpful, and i made my motivation letter for an erasmus course with it. This courses are post-grade courses that come with a scholarship. I tried to go by the guide as much as i could in my letter, and i'd appreciate if you can give me some tips :) . This is the one-Do note application form limits the letter to 2 pages, and this is one and half. Normal 0 21 false false false ES X-NONE X-NONE In the year 2006, a new career path opened for me. I took a three-day course in 3D CAD modeling. The subject wasn’t covered in the mechanical engineering programme of my University, at least not...http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterOfMotivation/hvvgn/post.htmFri, 05 Dec 2008 10:40:43 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:605570anonymousPlease could any one help me with letter of motivation .would aply in Crossways in European Humanities master degree programmes to specialise in traditional humanities with a modern languages background, taking European identities and European cultures as its theme. The major discipline is Literature, with a resolutely comparative approach based on English, French, Spanish, Italian, Portuguese and German linguistic realms. The programme also integrates courses in Aesthetics, the History of Ideas, Semiotics, Linguistics and Communication.   My email adress (Email removed)http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyLetterOfMotivation/hdnzq/post.htmWed, 03 Dec 2008 10:19:57 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:603244ali_giliHi, I've written the motivation letter for postgraduated education, But i'm not sure it's a complete one or not? Could anyone help me in this case? Here is my letter : After graduated in software engineering in the year 2007, I decided to continue education in master level. I searched for most U.K and Europe universities, but that didn’t take me long to come to the conclusion that ***University is very appropriate and also reasonable. It is located in the south coast of England and has easy access to the town. The university is one of the top 10 universities in the U.K. I’ve also read in it’s website that the university has a powerful researches’ units. During my bachelor education and even before, I was keenly...http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterMotivationNativeSpeaking/hdzxr/post.htmMon, 01 Dec 2008 12:46:14 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:601069riccardo83Sorry guys, ive done it myself... u can delete this post..http://www.englishforums.com/English/InterchangesMotivationLetter/hddql/post.htmMon, 01 Dec 2008 02:12:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:600536mola_samasHey Guys, i'm from brazil and new to this community. I'm attending an interchange program at my university and I need to write a motivation letter in english. Can someone make suggestions about the text or abot the grammar plz? Here's the letter: Normal 0 21 false false false PT-BR X-NONE X-NONE MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 Normal 0 21 false false false PT-BR X-NONE X-NONE MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Thiago de Campos Moraes, I am 19 years old and study at the Universidade Federal de São Carlos(UFSCar). I am a Computer...http://www.englishforums.com/English/UrgentlyCouldYouHelpMe/hcjrj/post.htmThu, 27 Nov 2008 20:33:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:597083sklarkahello, i am going to send my first motivation letter for exchange study. please, could you check it? thank you for your kindness. miroslava To whom it may concern, I am writing to express my great interest in study mobility at Faculty of Architecture in Graz University of Technology, which, I truly believe, will be the rich contribution for my life. Foreign studies and exchange programs always help students to improve their knowledge and gain new experiences. It is a unique opportunity which incites to confront acquired knowledge and learn more from a new point of view. An exchange programme would introduce me new challenges how to be a more qualified architect. Whole my study I am interested in Austrian architecture for the reason...http://www.englishforums.com/English/UrgentMotivationLetter/hrmdb/post.htm#589721Thu, 20 Nov 2008 05:28:22 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:589721moduffycobbHello Urgent! Your English writing is fantastic and I am happy to make a few small changes. For the most part this is already great writing, although I have made a few small changes in bold. Super impressed with the letter, though. It states your intentions, and it is clear and sophisticated. Good luck in the program! Mo Dear Sir or Madam , I graduated with a Bachelor’s degree of in Computer Science and Technology at *** University and I am writing to you to express my great interest in applying for the Master's Program in Machine Learning and Data Mining at ***. In 2004 I enrolled in the Computer Science and Technology course and since then I have been fascinated by these technologies in general and computers in...http://www.englishforums.com/English/UrgentMotivationLetter/hrmdb/post.htmSun, 16 Nov 2008 16:37:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:588167tnsettinghello! everyone!! i am really appreciate your comment!! i am applying for *** university !! please help me chech my my motivation letter such as grammar, structure, errors and so on. please do help me Dear Sir or Madam I graduated with Bachelor’s degree of Computer Science and Technology at *** University and writing to express my great interest in applying for the Master's Program in Machine Learning and Data Mining at ***. In 2004 I enrolled the Computer Science and Technology course and since then I have been fascinated by technologies in general and computers in particular. I possess a great thirst for knowledge and learning new disciplines and inspired by the subjects complexity and beauty. I am...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckLetterMotivation/gqxmk/post.htm#585765Mon, 10 Nov 2008 00:06:09 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:585765ferpecteditI am part of an online editing and proofreading service. For more info on this service, please see my profile. Here is my revision of your first two paragraphs (which I would combine into one) I am a 4th Semester business administration student at *** in Germany. I am writing to apply for the Study Abroad program at the ***. *** is my favourite of Australia’s universities because of its excellent reputation within Australia and beyond. The *** was recommended to me by my professors and by fellow students who had studied there. The courses at the *** will round out my first major (finances) and *** will offer me the opportunity to broaden my studies with units not offered in my home university. I cut out some excess words...http://www.englishforums.com/English/SopLetterMotivationEntrepreneurship/gqprp/post.htm#584242Thu, 06 Nov 2008 01:40:17 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:584242alpheccastarsThere are many examples posted on this site. http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=%22motivation+letter%22 Hint: These documents typically take a long time to edit. You are more likely to get help if you do the following: 1) Post only a paragraph or so at a time. 2) Have your writing well thought-out and corrected as best as you can first. You won't get much help if there are lots of simple spelling errors, poor punctuation, and small "i's" instead of capital I's, etc. 3) Don't say, I am applying for *** degree at *** university at *** specializing in ***. All that "***" stuff makes it nearly impossible to decipher. If you want to protect your privacy, just replace all the *** stuff with fake...http://www.englishforums.com/English/SopLetterMotivationEntrepreneurship/gqprp/post.htmWed, 05 Nov 2008 16:40:08 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:584084sturdyrajeshhi i am new to this site. i am preparing a motivation /sop letter for my PG. is there anyone to help me ??http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckLetterMotivation/gqxmk/post.htmWed, 05 Nov 2008 13:12:30 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:583994anonymousHi! Tried to register, but it did not really work out... Anyway, I would like to ask if you can please check my letter of motivation :-) I hope it is at least good enoguh to justify the beginning of the 4th paragraph :-D Thank you very much in advance. Greetings! Normal 0 21 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 Dear Sir or Madam, I am a 4 th Semester Business Administration student at *** in Germany. I am writing to apply for the Study Abroad program at the *** . There are several reasons I decided that the *** was my outstanding favourite of Australia’s Universities. It has an excellent reputation within Australia and far beyond. The *** was recommended to me by both my professors and fellow students who...http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterMotivationInternship/bnvwh/post.htm#583299Mon, 03 Nov 2008 20:52:19 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:583299anonymousaehm, yes, it is correct English actually.. after a comma in a letter you start with a capitalized word. In addition "I am looking forward to hearing from you" is correct... so I actually think its a good letter!http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/gqdbr/post.htmMon, 27 Oct 2008 07:36:10 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:580618gorodmanHi there! Could you be so kind to check my motivation letter. I will be really glad to see any comments. I also hope my letter will bring to someone an idea what to write in his letter of motivation. Thanks a lot Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you because I have a strong desire to study in *** Program. My dream is to be a high qualified manager. I want to be a specialist who has thorough understanding of how the manufacturing and business processes are organized and who is able to use control mechanisms and a high-level strategic underpinning in project management. While studying in *** I have made great strides. I can even say that I have become one of the best students of the university. I have been always maintaining an excellent...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterUndergraduateDegree-Uk/gqcmj/post.htmSun, 26 Oct 2008 22:29:38 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:580525iva_petkovaHello, I have written a motivation letter for an undergraduate degree in UK. Would you please have a look at it and show me my mistakes. I would really apreciate this. Thank you in advance Dear Sir or Madam, Recently my country Bulgaria became a member of the European Community and that requires to transform its economy according standards of the European Union. Thus the country needs new ideas and young professionals. Interaction with various backgrounds and cultures raises the awareness of the student. Furthermore it improves the language skills, enriches with knowledge and prepares to enter competently in real life and professional realization. I have been studying english since I was five years old and I have visited London...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterForMaster/gpxhz/post.htmWed, 22 Oct 2008 15:49:08 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:578991anonymousHi everybody, I have to write a letter of motivation for applying to a master program in business. I read some good letters in this forum and tried my best to write a letter myself. It woud be very helpful to get some feedback what you think about my text. It's the first draft and I know it's far from perfect. I hope to get some good advice. Thanks a lot in advance, Mike Dear Sir or Madam, I’m a German citizen and hereby apply for admission to study in the Master of XYZ program at XYZ University . In October 2008 I graduated from University with a Bachelor of Science Degree in Business Administration. My Bachelor-Thesis is about Affiliate-Marketing, an in Germany strong growing sector of E-Commerce. ...http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedPersonalStatementMotivation/gnhqg/post.htm#575740Sun, 12 Oct 2008 18:32:22 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:575740buset07Anything wrong with the above letter ? Thanks for your advice.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseMotivationLetter/gprbb/post.htmThu, 09 Oct 2008 14:39:46 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:574839luis_aguilera69I want to applay for an scholarship call Erasmus Mundus offered by the European comunity, i'm specially interesten in go to Swenden but this is the first time i write one of this letter and let say one of my special skill is not writing. Could someone tell how good or bad is the letter and also give me your opinion of what could be better to include in the letter.. in resume please critic my letter Thank you very much to all those ones that try to help Dear Sirs, I recently graduate from the Engineering department of the Universidad Autonoma de Yucatan, awarding the title of Physic Engineer. In the last years I have been working on different projects related with nanoscience in collaborations with my University and the...http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpLetterMotivation/prxz/post.htm#574767Thu, 09 Oct 2008 11:37:10 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:574767anonymousi am a graduate with bachelor`s in sociology and communication, that is minoring in communication i wish to do a voluntary work with an N.G.O AND NEEDS A LETTER OF MOTIVATION OF ABOUT 500 wordshttp://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneLookLetterMotivation-GiveFeedback/gxkgq/post.htm#572924Fri, 03 Oct 2008 22:34:23 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:572924rayhI am hold (or earned) an MSc in Biochemical Engineering graduate from the ***. During my master ' s studies I learnt (in AmE "learned") about the *** programmes (in AmE programs) offered by the university and after thoroughly informing myself about them I would like to introduce my candidacy for the *** program in ***. Before concluding with my bachelor studies in chemical engineering I started to hold a great deal of attention developed an interest in industrial biotechnology. This increasing (not incorrect but seems wordy and unnescssary) interest is what encouraged me to join the biochemical engineering master’s program at the ***. My experience therein has been more than satisfactory, however due to the...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneLookLetterMotivation-GiveFeedback/gxkgq/post.htmFri, 03 Oct 2008 21:31:44 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:572916madame bovaryI THANK IN ADVANCE THOSE WHO HELP ME! Dear Ms. ***, I am MSc in Biochemical Engineering graduate from the ***. During my master studies I learnt about the *** programmes offered by the university and after thoroughly informing myself about them I would like to introduce my candidacy for the *** program in ***. Before concluding with my bachelor studies in chemical engineering I started to hold a great deal of attention in industrial biotechnology. This increasing interest is what encouraged me to join the biochemical engineering master’s program at the ***. My experience therein has been more than satisfactory, however due to the structure of my master’s programme I was not able to follow as many courses in...http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterOfMotivation/gxdkl/post.htmSat, 27 Sep 2008 14:22:44 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:570956sovikknHI, I am applying for postgraduate course in geography and sustainability . I wish to pursue research after that. Could anyone check the English, clarity and suggest me improvements. LETTER OF MOTIVATION I always wanted to be an explorer. The constant urge to explore the unexplored and understand the unknown motivates me and move me forward in life. Right from my schooldays, mathematics, physics and geography are my favourite subjects. These subjects always invoked my curiosity and the desire “to see”. As a sincere student, I secured high marks in Class 10 and Class 12 and was among the top 100 students of the state. My passion and diligent efforts led me to IIT Kharagpur through IIT JEE examination which is...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/zxnvg/post.htm#568331Sat, 20 Sep 2008 16:02:20 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:568331anonymoushi my little brother needs help with his letter of motivation he is intending to study abroad in the uk but he hasn.t decided yet which descipline he is going choose whether business or sport so he needs to send 2 letters so please if any one wants to help him contact me on <email address removed by mod. Please register and add it to your profile.> thanks alothttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReviewLetterMotivation/gmpwr/post.htmWed, 10 Sep 2008 15:46:49 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:56455300mi was writing a letter of motivation for a master degree. please help me review the letter.. Dear Sir or Madam, I appreciate this opportunity to provide further background information in support of my application for Master in International Tourism management at Hochschule Bremen University of Applied Science. I graduated from Economic Department of Gadjah Mada University ( UGM ) on February 19,2008. To support my academic background, I spent my time to attend many activities . I was a tresurer for Marketing Student s Organization ( HIMMAPER) and coordinated some others activities. I also worked as Senior High School mathematic tutor at Primagama group Yogyakarta for two years. The past nine months I worked...http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterMotivationEventManagement/glddl/post.htmMon, 18 Aug 2008 10:20:10 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:556098maramelzHey muss bis am Donnerstag meinen LEtter of Motivation einreichen! Hatte bereits einen geschreiben aber dnan ist mein pc abgennippelt musste jetzt im akkord nen neuen shreiben,bitte um Korrekturen... Danke euch allen vielmals!!! Letter of Motivation Dear Madams and Sirs, I am hereby applying for entrance to the International Event-Management program for the fall 2008 term. I chose this program because of my interest in managing events and being around with many people,who also follow the same dream. Moreover I love talking in English, and I also had been spending the last year working and travelling abroad and improved my English as much as I could. As though it is a perfect combination, which the..offers. I always wanted to do...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanAnyoneWriteLetterMotivation/gkdlx/post.htmTue, 05 Aug 2008 21:51:01 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:551324anonymousHello Everyone! I need help how to write a Letter of Motivation in English. I'm applying the position as a Cabin Crew. Please help...thanks freestylistgirlhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterMotivationReceptionist/gjnjh/post.htmThu, 31 Jul 2008 14:48:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:549260anonymousHello to everyone, I need help! I have to write a letter of motivation, but I don't know how. I am applying for a job in a hotel in europe. can anyone give me example of letter of motivation regarding my application? thank you in advance.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckLetterMotivation/gjcww/post.htmFri, 25 Jul 2008 00:42:39 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:546065william shakespeareHello, I am glad to be a member of this interesting site. I have set up an letter of motivation for the application master Business Administartion. Would you please check it as soon as possible? -- Dear Sir/ Madam, The game of supply and demand is a never-ending developed process. This development asks organizations to change or to innovate. Organizations must manage the challenge of modern technology and even challenge it. Organizations must also exploit opportunities to preserve or to create a good market position. In short, organizations should be high-quality managed where are among other things focusing on internal and external environments factors. Paid attention to the dynamic of the businessworld and my own passion...http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterMotivationMe/gjcvq/post.htmThu, 24 Jul 2008 19:57:58 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:546005adriana866Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to apply for the Bachelor of Science Aerospace Engineering undergraduate programme. I have always been interested in engineering, especially in aerospace engineering, which I have been obsessed since I was born. As a little child, I wanted to learn how airplanes fly. So I recently completed my A-level at the technical “Gymnasium” XYZ. After graduating from the top secondary high school in my hometown it became a significant point of turn during my whole life. I decided to study at the University Karlsruhe, mechanical engineering. The two years of academic career in Germany has brought me a wide range of understanding in theories and some practical experience regarding technical progresses. ...http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterMotivationInternship/bnvwh/post.htm#540746Sun, 13 Jul 2008 12:58:27 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:540746tanitor u rahther don't know, not doesn't know;) Anon, It's very nice and helpful of you to correct what others wrote more than two years ago, but please mind your spelling. It's "you", not "u"; " rather", not "rahther".http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseSomeoneReadCorrectMistake-LetterMotivation/ggjll/post.htmFri, 27 Jun 2008 16:01:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:533403showboyDear admission office, I wish to apply for admission to pursue a Master’s Degree in Diplomatic YaleUniversity for the 2008/2009 academic year beginning in spring. Prior to my University study, diplomacy has always influenced my choice of study because diplomacy is an important factor in the development of any society. Why? Society needs decisive leaders on the international scene, to protect its interests, reason why my undergraduate academic background is base on two major discipline, History and Political sciences which are some of the core subjects in diplomacy . I studied in two areas related to diplomacy because I believed that I would be preparing my self to pursue a career in diplomacy or work in an...http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterMotivationGraduteStudies-Diplomacy/ggvxn/post.htmTue, 24 Jun 2008 19:46:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:532011showboyDear admission office, I wish to apply for admission to pursue a Master’s Degree in Diplomatic YaleUniversity for the 2008/2009 academic year beginning in spring. Prior to my University study, diplomacy has always influenced my choice of study because diplomacy is an important factor in the development of any society. Why? Society needs decisive leaders on the international scene, to protect its interests, reason why my undergraduate academic background is base on two major discipline, History and Political sciences which are some of the core subjects in diplomacy . I studied in two areas related to diplomacy because I believed that I would be preparing my self to pursue a career in diplomacy or work in an...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectionLetterMotivationCover-Letter/dnqph/post.htm#518059Fri, 23 May 2008 18:24:08 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:518059miprego50I was browsing in internet trying to choose some pictures among a lot of them my son has in the net. inally i found some I am sending to you. I have been thinking about you more than a little bit. Have you been thinking about me a little bit at least?. I am going to to respond your questonshttp://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterMotivationCompany-Scholarships/gcpqz/post.htm#515701Mon, 19 May 2008 16:58:05 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:515701anonymousDear Sir/Madam, I am writing to ask that you consider my application for a scholarship under the *** Masters Program Scholarships. I will be admitted to the M.Sc. program in Information Technology in the Universitaet ABCD this year after graduating 7 th in my year from the department. of Computer Science & Engineering from AAAA University of Science & Technology, a well regarded university in BBBB. My degree provided a good understanding of the application of electrical and computational methods. Additionally I have undertaken extra courses to ensure that I have a strong grasp of programming and engineering applications including data structures, algorithms and operating systems. I...http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterMotivationCompany-Scholarships/gcpqz/post.htmMon, 19 May 2008 11:23:24 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:515564bgosswamiHi, Recently I came to know about this forum. And all of you did a great job here. I need to submit a motivation letter for a scholarship by tomorrow. So I made a draft one. Could you please check my letter and provide your valuable comments or suggestions. I will be very grateful for your help. Thanks in advance Letter of Motivation I am writing to apply for the *** Masters Program Scholarships. I get admission to the M.Sc. program in Information Technology in the Universitaet ABCD this year. I have completed my under graduation from the dept. of Computer Science & Engineering from AAAA University of Science & Technology, one of the prestigious public university in BBBB. I have outstanding...