By Letter of motivation, Capital letters

Hi all, I'm another person that needs help with a Letter of Motivation... It would be great if you had a look at it. I would be very thankful for any comment on the structure, grammar..., also I'm interested in the expression you would have of me after reading the lom. The institution I apply...

1. Run a spell-check. You seem to have problems with plurals as well, so work on that. 2. Re-write the first paragraph. The first sentence has you tying yourself in knots. Just state that you are writing to apply for the internship. The second sentence needs to take a different emphasis: why...