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Hello,I am Richard, a Dutch undergraduate student applying for a Masters programme in London, England. As a part of the application form, I have to give 'further information' , which I interpreted as roughly analogous to a letter of motivation:"9. Further InformationPlease state your...

Looks good to me - just a couple more suggestions: and working environment. But I hope to improve - delete 'But'. ZZZ provides the opportunity to achieve the goals I expect from a stay abroad - more natural to say something like 'ZZZ will allow me to fulfill my goals in studying abroad'. You...

hi guys, could you do me the favour and check my letter of motivation. (mistakes, bad formulations, commas etc.) I am applying for an internship in the USA. This letter of motivation is send to a company that is looking for an internship place for me. Thats why I don't have the names of the...

Hi I've highlighted the problem areas you might want to re-write or correct. Also, the name of our country is the United Kingdom, not Great Britain, so you should change that part. I am writing to you to apply for the Master programme in Media Studies, which is offered by your university. I...

I`m getting in to it as well, so don`t expact much from me.... But consider one thing: ""Do not start the body of the mail with a capital letter, since it follows a comma."" I also believe that: I am looking forward to hearing from you. is not correct English.. however I doesnt kwno wheter it...