By Letter of motivation, Paragraphs

Good people please help me urgently with this issue. I want to apply for a post of office assistant so they asked me to submit the letter of motivation and i do not know where to stay because i do not know how to write that letter. I am really desparete cause the closing date is near. I do not...

Hi,according to NonatheBrit covering letters in the UK are very short and only sounds enthusiatic, that's all but this appies only to the UK. I have a post with regard to the subject. I tried to show you that you can shorten the second paragraph.As for me, I had success with long and with short...

no, no need to be sorry. u might be right...im stating to think i might have put to much information in the second paragraph

Hi,attracting attention is of course your main aim but you should do this without backfiring:-) There are many diverse ways how to attract attention. In my opinion, you had chosen not the best one but of course this is only my opinion.They don't need the full description of your course. This...

thanks for the advice...just wants to make something that attracts attention. Do you think i should phrase it more traditionally?---------------------------------------------------well here a different version of the second paragraph: After my regular graduation I decided to specialize with...

Hi,with regard to paragraph 1: you are writing to them because there is an opportunity not because you were everywhere. Millions of people are born in Russia but this is not a reason for an international career. If you want to, you can point of your international experience, but this is...

hey guys im applying for an international study program. my letter is not finished yet. but i would like to hear any comments about what i've done so far...I'm working with this particular layout:--------------------------------First Paragraph: "Why I'm Writing" -- Introduction of self and...

i dont understand how this paragraph is supposed to help your applicationAt this time, people worldwide started to aware of the warm effects on earth. *** is an island with unique landforms with various ecology types, but people here do not especially cared about this issue. News like coral...

Hello,I am Richard, a Dutch undergraduate student applying for a Masters programme in London, England. As a part of the application form, I have to give 'further information' , which I interpreted as roughly analogous to a letter of motivation:"9. Further InformationPlease state your...

I am French, leaving in the US and need to prepare a CV and a letter of motivation for a position in the UK. In reading many posts on this (neat) forum, I noticed that there are many differences in the format of CVs for each country and I would like to make sure that what I read seems...