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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>Search results for 'tag:Literature tag:Adverbs' matching tags 'Literature' and 'Adverbs'</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aLiterature+tag%3aAdverbs&amp;tag=Literature,Adverbs&amp;orTags=0</link><description>Search results for 'tag:Literature tag:Adverbs' matching tags 'Literature' and 'Adverbs'</description><dc:language>en-US</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3191.21962)</generator><item><title>Re: visited + object OR visited + adverb of location</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/VisitedObjectVisitedAdverbLocation/zdgbz/post.htm#434100</link><pubDate>Wed, 24 Oct 2007 06:54:49 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:434100</guid><dc:creator>ClarkePeters</dc:creator><description>Thanks Clive,&lt;br&gt;This is my first foray into grammar with my adult students (I usually teach conversation, literature, news English and the like).&amp;nbsp; So this question really threw me for a loop.&amp;nbsp; I was teaching adverbs at the time (using "soon" in " I will visit Europe soon") so this is how the question came up.&amp;nbsp; &lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Your examples are great.&lt;br&gt;</description></item><item><title>My interview experience.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyInterviewExperience/vqxjm/post.htm</link><pubDate>Mon, 10 Sep 2007 20:07:48 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:416903</guid><dc:creator>Bird Of Paradise</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;I belong to a country where English is used as a second language, so it is not my first language. A few days ago I appeared in an interview for the post of English Teacher. I want to share a few points of that interview for your worthy comments. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I use A for interviewer and B for myself.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; After the formal greetings,&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; A:&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;Introduce yourself.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; B.&amp;nbsp; Sir, I have come from Swabiâ¦..&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;OL&gt;
&lt;LI&gt;&amp;nbsp;Donât say âI have come fromâ say âI come fromâ&lt;/LI&gt;&lt;/OL&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Then I was asked some questions in English Literature and then,&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;OL&gt;
&lt;LI&gt;How many moods are there in English Grammar?&lt;/LI&gt;
&lt;LI&gt;Sir, there are three moods in English grammar, Indicative, imperative and subjunctive.&lt;/LI&gt;&lt;/OL&gt;
&lt;OL&gt;
&lt;LI&gt;Can we use Model auxiliary with infinite clause.&lt;/LI&gt;
&lt;LI&gt;Yes sir, we can.&lt;/LI&gt;&lt;/OL&gt;
&lt;OL&gt;
&lt;LI&gt;How? Give an example.&lt;/LI&gt;
&lt;LI&gt;&amp;nbsp;For example âI will goâ&lt;/LI&gt;&lt;/OL&gt;
&lt;OL&gt;
&lt;LI&gt;What is an infinite clause?&lt;/LI&gt;
&lt;LI&gt;A clause, which doesnât show tense. &lt;/LI&gt;&lt;/OL&gt;
&lt;OL&gt;
&lt;LI&gt;No. You are wrong.&lt;/LI&gt;&lt;/OL&gt;
&lt;OL&gt;
&lt;LI&gt;Ok, tell my in how many ways can we use a subordinate clause?&lt;/LI&gt;
&lt;LI&gt;Well sir, there are different kinds of subordinate clauseâ¦&lt;/LI&gt;&lt;/OL&gt;
&lt;OL&gt;
&lt;LI&gt;No, no. Just tell me exactly in how many ways can we use it, like with subject-verb, subject-adverb etc.&lt;/LI&gt;
&lt;LI&gt;Sorry sir.(it was really confusing for me.)&lt;/LI&gt;&lt;/OL&gt;
&lt;P&gt;A.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Ok, âHe is marriedâ which part of speech is &lt;B&gt;married&lt;/B&gt;?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;B.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Sir, it the past participle form of the verb &lt;B&gt;marry&lt;/B&gt; and here it is used as an adjective.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;These are some of the point of my interview. Please give some comments. Thanks.</description></item><item><title>Re: a reader aloud, straight-faced humour and unsurpassed</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ReaderAloudStraightFacedHumour-Unsurpassed/vdzjj/post.htm#350430</link><pubDate>Fri, 13 Apr 2007 12:56:54 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:350430</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;Hi,&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;Can you please&amp;nbsp;explain to me more thoroughly the meaning of the sentence ( i can't get the idea here)&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;&lt;U&gt;'As a reader aloud&lt;/U&gt; of his own work, Andersen was &lt;U&gt;unsurpassed&lt;/U&gt;, and this tale ( the ugly duckling) is always a favourite'&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;Andersen sometimes read his own work aloud, to other people. No other author did this kind of thing&amp;nbsp; better than Andersen. The story, 'The Ugly Duckling', was a favourite with the audiences who listened to him.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;Moreover, in my opinion, 'aloud' is a adverb, and it shouldn't be used after a noun 'reader', is this a grammatical error?&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt; No, it's just an unusual word order. Certain kinds of unusual word orders are found in literature sometimes.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Best wishes, Clive&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Proper use of adverb of frequency</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProperAdverbFrequency/2/dbkwv/Post.htm#258506</link><pubDate>Wed, 23 Aug 2006 10:42:00 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:258506</guid><dc:creator>Aperisic</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;CalifJim wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;For a native it is far easier&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;BR&gt;I often wonder if that is true!&amp;nbsp; Especially when it comes to explaining it all.&amp;nbsp; &lt;img src="/emoticons/emotion-1.gif" alt="Smile [:)]" /&gt;&lt;BR&gt;&lt;BR&gt;CJ&lt;BR&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The trouble with a native is that they have a "natural" feeling, but for those who want to learn language that is not helpful. For a native it is very difficult to explain why something is the way it is, because they know how it is and really never thought about &lt;EM&gt;why&lt;/EM&gt;. Nevertheless, event they follow the logical pattern, but usually they cannot discern it. The rules I know are almost without an exception regarded as advanced, but there is nothing advanced in them. You definitely should be relatively smarter in order to follow them, but if you want to learn a new language that is a premise, isn't it.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;However, the logic behind the grammar rules must be relatively simple, because not all people in UK or USA or Australia... are geniuses and they all speak the language using, even if local, the group of logical guidelines.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;When you learn a foreign language you have rules and tests that strictly follow these rules. However, absurd is that when a native tries to solve these tests they make sometimes even more mistakes than those who learn the language. Sorry, but what language a foreigner wants to learn then, some foreign variant of English? Or maybe Brits or Americans are so proud of their knowledge of English that foreigners are forbidden to enter the realm of higher society. I am ironic here slightly. Back to the track.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The position of adverb is to be decided upon their logic and effect. There are groups of adverbs based on their function that are commonly positioned before a verb, after a verb, before a auxiliary verb... This is not something you have to learn by heart (some things you have to, though, like: I am, you are, he is, it is... because that is easier than to read and remember the book about the origin "am" "are" "is"...) but you have to be aware that they do have their normal position.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Here is an example&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I hit.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I hit hard. is OK&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I hard hit. is not OK, but &lt;STRONG&gt;not&lt;/STRONG&gt;&amp;nbsp;just&amp;nbsp;because the rule says that hard &lt;EM&gt;must&lt;/EM&gt; go after the verb&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The reason is that if you place &lt;EM&gt;hard&lt;/EM&gt; before &lt;EM&gt;hit&lt;/EM&gt;, there is a great confusion about &lt;EM&gt;hit&lt;/EM&gt;: is it a verb or it is a noun. I [what] hard hit&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I hit very hard. is OK&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I hit so hard. is OK&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I hit the ball.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I hit the ball hard. is OK&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I hit hard the ball. is not usual&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The place of &lt;EM&gt;hard&lt;/EM&gt; between &lt;EM&gt;hit&lt;/EM&gt; and &lt;EM&gt;the ball&lt;/EM&gt; is not common because the object &lt;EM&gt;the ball&lt;/EM&gt; is usually more important for the action &lt;EM&gt;to hit &lt;/EM&gt;than the adverb &lt;EM&gt;hard&lt;/EM&gt;. However, I can create a sentence when this position is acceptable&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;EM&gt;I hit hard the ball, but I was very soft with his face.&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;What I am saying is that while anyone reads about the position of a typical adverb it is advisable to try to figure out what could be the reason for such rule. Soon or later the logic is going to pop out. The rules are only the extraction of the logic you usually and unfortunately have to find for yourself. You can't memorize a complete grammar of any language -&amp;nbsp;nobody can.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;However, to pass that test one has to follow the given guidelines as long as it one's to bear. In some such cases I can't help, because for several rules there is no general agreement about the grammar rules and it is up to their school, teacher or literature. Worst of all I can give a wrong instruction because in my literature it says something else or I might not understand the problem.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;So here are the two examples of a frequency adverb to complete the story&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;EM&gt;She seldom speaks while she drives a car.&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;EM&gt;She speaks seldom in her car.&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;[People in the forums constantly ask "which answer is correct and &lt;EM&gt;why&lt;/EM&gt;". I am talking here about their need to know &lt;EM&gt;why&lt;/EM&gt; and almost without an exception you can find &lt;EM&gt;why&lt;/EM&gt;.] &lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>between/among</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/BetweenAmong/cngxw/post.htm</link><pubDate>Tue, 06 Jun 2006 07:59:24 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:232891</guid><dc:creator>BW2/3</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;Perhaps &lt;STRONG&gt;underlying the debate&lt;/STRONG&gt; is that familar, false opposition set up &lt;STRONG&gt;between &lt;/STRONG&gt;different kinds of fiction, according&lt;STRONG&gt; to which&lt;/STRONG&gt; enjoyable &lt;STRONG&gt;novels are&lt;/STRONG&gt; held to be somehow slightly lowbrow, and &lt;STRONG&gt;a novel&lt;/STRONG&gt; is not considered true literature unless it is a tiny bit dull. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Question, &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;" Underlying the debate "&amp;nbsp; why is not " the underlying debate " ?&amp;nbsp; Is it because the adverb word " perhaps " in front of&amp;nbsp; " underlying "&amp;nbsp; &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Can the word " between " change to " among " ?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Does&amp;nbsp;the word " between " mean " which......lowbrow" and " a&amp;nbsp;novel.........dull" ?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Is that possible in a relative phrase clause to introduce the rest of the clause that a subject is plural and another is singluar ?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;for example,&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;to which&lt;/STRONG&gt; enjoyable &lt;STRONG&gt;novels are&lt;/STRONG&gt; held to be somehow slightly lowbrow, and &lt;STRONG&gt;a novel&lt;/STRONG&gt; is not considered true literature unless it is a tiny bit dull. &lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: did</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/Did/cnzrk/post.htm#232366</link><pubDate>Sun, 04 Jun 2006 11:48:43 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:232366</guid><dc:creator>Welkins2139</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;Maybe,&lt;/STRONG&gt; &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Your sentence is formal or literature type.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I think &lt;STRONG&gt;auxiliary + subject&lt;/STRONG&gt;&amp;nbsp;has to be used&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;after expressions contain&amp;nbsp;" only " &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff0000&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;&lt;EM&gt;.&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff0000&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;If you delete " did ", &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The sentence will be like, &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff0000&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;&lt;EM&gt;Only after she died, &lt;FONT color=#ff0000&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;I realized that she was actually a nice person. ( is this sentence ok ?)&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff0000&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;A comma is necessary because an " after"&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;adverb dependent clause is at the beginning. &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff0000&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;I think the adverb "only " modifis&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff0000&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;&amp;nbsp;" after.....died" &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff0000&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;and the " only...... died " modifies the whole indenpdent sentence " I..............person"&lt;BR&gt;&lt;/P&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: a passage need polishing.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/APassageNeedPolishing/bqvhq/post.htm#163420</link><pubDate>Sun, 27 Nov 2005 15:22:05 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:163420</guid><dc:creator>Crux_online</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Hly2004 wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;The author adopted a unique narrating way to link
the there unrelated scenarios organically and accurately, by parallel
development, cross narration, head-to-tail conjugation, and meticulous
care. Readers, under these circumstances, gradually culminate in the
most pleasant stage, making the story climbing to the climax without
noticing. And to our surprise, the author brings us back from the
nearly crazy mania to reality and sense, revealing the authorâs
top-notch story-telling skill.&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
Some proposed changes:&lt;br&gt;
The author adopted &lt;i&gt;(used/employed are good, too)&lt;/i&gt; a unique &lt;b&gt;narration style&lt;/b&gt; to link the &lt;b&gt;three&lt;/b&gt; unrelated
scenarios organically &lt;b&gt;&lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;[deleted]&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/b&gt; &lt;b&gt;through &lt;/b&gt;parallel development, cross
narration, &lt;b&gt;and&lt;/b&gt; head-to-tail conjugation&lt;b&gt; with &lt;/b&gt;meticulous care. &lt;b&gt;The reader&lt;/b&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;[&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;b&gt;optional:&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;,&lt;b&gt;&lt;/b&gt; under these circumstances,]&lt;/font&gt; gradually &lt;b&gt;becomes absorbed, unaware of the approaching climax.&lt;/b&gt;. &lt;b&gt;The author is then able to bring the reader&lt;/b&gt; back &lt;b&gt;&lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;[deleted]&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/b&gt; to
reality and sense, revealing the authorâs top-notch story-telling skill.&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;With the changes:&lt;br&gt;
The author adopted a unique narration style to link the three unrelated
scenarios organically&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt; through parallel development, cross
narration, and head-to-tail conjugation with meticulous care. The reader&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt; gradually becomes absorbed, unaware of the approaching climax.. The author is then able to bring the reader back&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt; to
reality and sense, revealing the authorâs top-notch story-telling skill.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
See how this fits into the rest of the literature and determine whether
it is what you're wanting.&amp;nbsp; Also, who is your target
audience?&amp;nbsp; Whether and to what extent you use idiomatic
expressions will depend on your target audience.&amp;nbsp; &lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
I recommend that you get a lot of feedback and multiple versions before
committing to a final version.&amp;nbsp; Some writers are strong proponents
of brevity--reducing the passage to its core meaning without the
unecessary flourish of adjectives and adverbs.&amp;nbsp; Others are equally
strong proponents of the flourish, believing that the imagery should be
created by the author, leaving the reader to enjoy the story (or
passage) without the burden of conjuring the scene as for
themselves.&amp;nbsp; &lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
There are also some very 'artsy' techniques that you can investigate and begin to incorporate into your prose, such as &lt;i&gt;alliteration&lt;/i&gt; or the use of &lt;i&gt;meter&lt;/i&gt;.&amp;nbsp;
These are concepts you'll normally find discussed in the context of
poetry, but are very useful in other types of writing as well.&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
You will use different techniques on different writings.&amp;nbsp; Your perfect passage will be in there somewhere.&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
C&lt;br&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: phrasal verbs</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PhrasalVerbs/bxzkl/post.htm#153929</link><pubDate>Tue, 01 Nov 2005 16:01:38 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:153929</guid><dc:creator>CalifJim</dc:creator><description>Hi, Pieanne,&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
If you research the literature on this topic you will find that
different authors prefer different terminology.&amp;nbsp; I've seen it
called "adverb", "preposition", and "particle".&amp;nbsp; "preposition" is
popular among the transformational grammarians.&amp;nbsp; They theorize
that prepositions do not need objects to be considered
prepositions.&amp;nbsp; Personally, I prefer "particle".&amp;nbsp; It seems to
be the most neutral description.&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
Jim&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: HELP ME .....</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpMe/bldvm/post.htm#138511</link><pubDate>Sat, 17 Sep 2005 15:54:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:138511</guid><dc:creator>davkett</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;For the rest, Kela, I'm&amp;nbsp; going to&amp;nbsp;give you hints (in blue), so that you can try to improve things yourself.&amp;nbsp; (A repeated problem is your use of indefinite pronouns--for instance, writing 'he' when the reader doesn't know which person 'he' refers to&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Rommel described himself&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;as &lt;/FONT&gt;a boy&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;who&lt;/FONT&gt; doesnât like to participate in any activities, he demonstrated that he was interested in other &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;kind (plural)&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;of hobbies. &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;(Two sentences.)&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;He was good at drawing &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;Japaneseâs&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;(punctuation)&lt;/FONT&gt; cartoons&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt; &lt;/FONT&gt;but &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;it&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/FONT&gt;wasnât &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;enough (for what?).&lt;/FONT&gt; It was a &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;dramatically&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;(adverb/adjective?)&lt;/FONT&gt; situation for &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;him &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;(who?)&lt;/FONT&gt; because &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;he (who?)&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;didnât know what he &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;(who?)&lt;/FONT&gt; should be &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;from&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;(preposition)&lt;/FONT&gt; Rommel. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;He couldnât believe &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;that it&lt;/FONT&gt; was possible &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;for&lt;/FONT&gt; a boy&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;to&lt;/FONT&gt; be in&amp;nbsp;fourth grade if he couldnât read, and &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;he couldn't&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;believe&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;that noone&lt;/FONT&gt; had done anything about it. He couldnât do anything&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;to &lt;/FONT&gt;change &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;it (what?).&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;For a long time&lt;/FONT&gt;, he continued teaching at the same school. He &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;was working&lt;/FONT&gt; hard &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;for (preposition)&lt;/FONT&gt; obtain a certificate from a very&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;prestigious&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;u&lt;/FONT&gt;niversity in Michigan &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;where&lt;/FONT&gt; the students &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;was (plural) &lt;/FONT&gt;improving &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;themselves&lt;/FONT&gt;. All of them had done&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;so&lt;/FONT&gt; except Rommel. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;He couldnât&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;understand&lt;/FONT&gt; how&amp;nbsp;nobody &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;had paid&lt;/FONT&gt; attention&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;to&lt;/FONT&gt; Rommelâs problem. &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;He&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;(does this teacher have a name?)&lt;/FONT&gt; had a meeting with a &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;fellow&lt;/FONT&gt; teacher, &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;who had &lt;/FONT&gt;reached a &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;stupid (word choice)&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;conclusion about him:&amp;nbsp; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;"Rommel&lt;/FONT&gt; canât read, thatâs all&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;"&lt;/FONT&gt;.&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;While&lt;/FONT&gt; his classmates were reading or writing &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;(comma)&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;Rommel&lt;/FONT&gt; was doing&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;something&lt;/FONT&gt; else.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;He &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;(who?)&lt;/FONT&gt; believed that he was a clever guy, because he &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;(who?)&lt;/FONT&gt; didn't have any problem about &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;learn (&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;present participle)&lt;/FONT&gt; math. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Rommel could understand the plots of books that the teacher read for his students to improve their &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;reading&lt;/FONT&gt; abilities. Rommel participated in the speeches and he lived the story that the teacher&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt; tells (past tense)&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;them. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;After &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;that (what?)&lt;/FONT&gt;, &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;he (who?)&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;made&lt;/FONT&gt; an important decision. He &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;tried a&amp;nbsp;new teaching plan&lt;/FONT&gt;.&amp;nbsp; Even though, he didnât receive&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;compensation&lt;/FONT&gt; for&amp;nbsp;it, &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;the teacher&amp;nbsp;spent an extra few minutes each&amp;nbsp;day&amp;nbsp;with Rommel, reading together&lt;/FONT&gt; an interesting and amazing book, &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;&lt;EM&gt;Harry Potter&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;His &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;method was unusual&lt;/FONT&gt;. The teacher &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;would&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt; read&amp;nbsp;a&lt;/FONT&gt; line from the book, &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;then Rommel would be asked to recognize one of the words&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;EM&gt;. &lt;/EM&gt;&amp;nbsp;If he couldnât do it, he would receive a punishment, a soft pinch. If he &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;could identify&lt;/FONT&gt; the word &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;(comma)&lt;/FONT&gt; &amp;nbsp;the teacher&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;would&lt;/FONT&gt; continue telling him the story. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;After many&lt;/FONT&gt; long weeks, in spite of &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;practice (present participle)&lt;/FONT&gt; a lot, Rommel &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;was still not able to&lt;/FONT&gt; to read. He felt disappointed and guilty about it. But the&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;truth&lt;/FONT&gt; was that the &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;whole educational system &amp;nbsp;was at fault&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;because nothing had been done&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;to resolve the problem&lt;/FONT&gt;.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Rommelâs teacher likes &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;(past tense)&lt;/FONT&gt; so much to read. He had a lot of different kinds of books in his small apartment.&amp;nbsp; He gave &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;Rommel&lt;/FONT&gt; a special gift, a VCR tape and a book that &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;might help&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;him to&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;make an extra effort&lt;/FONT&gt;. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;This gift created new opportunities for the two of them to spend more hours together,&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;until, finally,&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;Rommel could read. They &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;had &lt;/FONT&gt;worked hard&amp;nbsp;until they &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;obtained a&lt;/FONT&gt; good result. The teacher encouraged &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;Rommel&lt;/FONT&gt; to &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;immerse himself in the amazing world of&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt; literature&lt;/FONT&gt;.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;He&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;taught&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;strike&gt;since&lt;/strike&gt; him&amp;nbsp;the elemental things, &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;and&lt;/FONT&gt; how &lt;strike&gt;he had&lt;/strike&gt; to pronounce each&amp;nbsp;letter until he could recognize all of them.&amp;nbsp; Rommel, like &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;(article)&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;good draftsman, --he-- was able to create an ingenious system that &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;helped&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt; &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;him to remember&lt;/FONT&gt; his lesson. He &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;created&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;a&lt;/FONT&gt; picture for each &lt;strike&gt;one&lt;/strike&gt; letter &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;(period)&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp; If he couldnât remember &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;a letter&lt;/FONT&gt;, he would check &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;its picture&lt;/FONT&gt; on the wall.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;After&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt; a long time of&lt;/FONT&gt; hard work, Rommel &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;began reading&lt;/FONT&gt; in front of some classmates and &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;also before&lt;/FONT&gt; the woman&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;who had never&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;believed in his ability&lt;/FONT&gt; to do it. &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;Rommel was gradually able to&amp;nbsp;read any&lt;/FONT&gt; kind of literature and he enjoyed doing it.&amp;nbsp; Donât stop him now.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Now he&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;has&lt;/FONT&gt; to learn to write&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;.&amp;nbsp; And&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;he&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;has begun to do so,&amp;nbsp;with a little&lt;/FONT&gt; help from his dear teacher. &lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: please help me</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/bkhkl/post.htm#134855</link><pubDate>Wed, 07 Sep 2005 18:49:56 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:134855</guid><dc:creator>WaÃ¯ti</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;So you would be Dominik from Koln ? Nice meeting you..&lt;BR&gt;I've tried reviewing part of your text : addition or changes in purple, removals with the # sign. Plus question mark on 'insightfully' : you're supposed to use an adverb here but I don't think there is one derived from the adjective insightful. And question mark on 'unforgettable' : not sure whether it means 'so great you cannnot forget it' or 'so bad you cannot forget it'...&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Kolndom wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;issue: &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it &lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;once &lt;/FONT&gt;was. People can learn as much&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;##&lt;/FONT&gt; watching television as they can &lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;##&lt;/FONT&gt; reading books. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;my response: &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Are books becoming relatively unimportant in the age of television? Even though television prop&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff" color=#800080&gt;a&lt;/FONT&gt;gates i&lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;n&lt;/FONT&gt;formation faster, reading book is still of great value today, because books &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff" color=#000000&gt;describe&lt;/FONT&gt; facts more precisely, analyze topics more insightful&lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;ly (?)&lt;/FONT&gt;, and serves as the foundation of literature.&amp;nbsp; &lt;BR&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Books provide more precise information about certain facts. According to common sense, it would take &lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;a&lt;/FONT&gt; book&lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;#&lt;/FONT&gt; reader much more time to read about a certain person or event than&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;###&lt;/FONT&gt; a audience would spend&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;##&lt;/FONT&gt; watching TV programs about the same thing. Consequently, unlike television which&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;aims&lt;/FONT&gt; at delivering the audience &lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;with&lt;/FONT&gt; the general information concerning a person or event within the shortest possible time, books are often cap&lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;#&lt;/FONT&gt;able of providing more complete information and precise description about the person or event. For example, two years ago, when Chinese people recovered from the di&lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;s&lt;/FONT&gt;aster of SARS, there were many TV programs or books reviewing the unforgettable &lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;(?) past (?)&lt;/FONT&gt; seven months. What we saw on the TV program was no more than operation room, patients, doctors and officers &lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;of the&lt;/FONT&gt; public health mini&lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;s&lt;/FONT&gt;try. On the other side, we could find much richer information in books concerning this issue, from first case found in Guangdong to first death in Peking, from the origin of the virus to the treatment of &lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;the&lt;/FONT&gt; disease, from &lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;the&lt;/FONT&gt; withhold&lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;ing&lt;/FONT&gt; of information at the beginning to the public awareness of it finally. In this way, book provides us &lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;a &lt;/FONT&gt;wider range of information than TV does.&lt;/P&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;</description></item></channel></rss>