In Literature^x, Yours sincerely^x, Commas^x

Hello, I am Richard, a Dutch undergraduate student applying for a Masters programme in London, England. As a part of the application form, I have to give 'further information' , which I interpreted as roughly analogous to a letter of motivation: " 9. Further Information Please state your...

Hi I've highlighted the problem areas you might want to re-write or correct. Also, the name of our country is the United Kingdom, not Great Britain, so you should change that part. I am writing to you to apply for the Master programme in Media Studies, which is offered by your university....

Jon, I think your letter reads quite well. One sentence stood out to me because it is the same type of structure that I have difficulty with. I am going to play with it a bit. You might find you don't like my revised letter. If that is the case, at least you are better prepared to tweak...