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I wrote these poems before writing "Davet - Plea", but I forgot to login while sending it. I waited for my message to be shown with a name of "Anonymous", but it hasn't shown yet. So I'm sending them again. This time if my previous message gets shown, there will be two...

.I have crossed out inappropriate material and underlined some problem areas. You have trouble with commas and with chatting:In taking upon my Senior Honors Project I have thrown myself over a ledge with the intention to climb back up. Through this year my drive, enthusiasm, and patience have...

This is a senior honors project essay about a programming job with PHP. I know it's a lot of work but I need a grammar check done. Here it is::In taking upon my Senior Honors Project I have thrown myself over a ledge with the intention to climb back up. Through this year my drive,...