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thanks for the correcting, but do you think concerning the contextthat it has something Anti in it, which is clearly visible!!???

Hi FSI have written exactly one sonnet in my life and a few verses for songs I have written. What is wrong and what is right in a poem is very much a matter of opinion. I have "corrected" just a few expressions that caught my ear. Some other parts of your poem might have jarred in some...

I'd be so greatful it somone could take 2 minutes to correct my poemif there are any mistakes in it, which I believe there are:P!

Could someone correct my anti-obsessive love poemthe assignment was to write a anti poem, and I waswondering wheter this is a anti-love poem, is not superstrongly written, so pls give your advise and commentsand corrections, I would really appreciate that!Anti- Obsessive LoveIn the ocean of...

hey man i like this poem on here for the girl i love the most and im not a very good poem writer so i looked up poems and found urs and it was good so i had to copy it were i can give it to my gf and if u wanna write me my email is thanx for your poem again thank ya alot.

Basically, I have been set a piece of coursework: to compare the aforementioned poems. I am going for an A* piece at GCSE level, there is no particular question, just to compare the four poems. I have almost completed My Last Duchess, mentioning all the themes I can think of and reading the...

Why won't you be The one I live for? I can't get enough of you I always want more If you can't tell that I love you Then you're not very smart Because Cupid's arrow has Gone straight through my heart You never knew that It was you from the start And you've got the...

to my girlfriend, hey i love her, each time i see her it gives my heart a stir, she's beautiful to me and anyone who can see, i love her nose, i love her eyes, i love her lips i love her sweet thighs, her soft neck, i love her tummy and thats not all, heck, i love her legs, feet , toes...

you are my girl, my only wonder my heart will beat, qucik like thunder you are my dream girl thats come true you are my angel, and i love you of all the girls ive ever met your the one i cant forget take my hand, i hold my breath tears run down, i love you best falling angel thats what...

i can write poetry but...i dont know for some reason i cant write anything for him...i've written stuff for him before we started going out but now that we are i'm having trouble =/