When I read your first line, as displayed in the forum list, I wanted to say that Shakespeare might agree with you. But when I read your post in its entirety, I changed my mind. I do agree that the crafting of a poem is never careless, although

Poetry isn't my strength, but I can tell that you have put considerable effort, with a good amount of success, into this sonnet. I feel, however, that it reads more like an "exercise" than a love poem. I have a feeling that if you

honestly, if she loves you, anything you write she will like. Just make it personal and and rhyme it ever two lines. EX. I love the way you smile, our time together is worthwhile. See not that hard. You can do it and she will love it no matter

Yeah i thaught just the same...but when i started writing it just flowed out like i had been doing it for years...only inspiration i needed was her

This is Poem by myself, I think this is my best work that I did for my girlfriend. It took me several days to come up with this. Hope you guys enjoy it. Oh temptress beauty, should I compare you to the morning dew or to the fire Even flowers

Anytime I see you make me smile and anytime when I am not beside you I think about you. I love the smile on your face. You make me happy. I love you. I love your warmth when you hug me. My heart longs for you when you’re away. I want to be there

Anti-Love by – Faisal Syed   In the ocean of your eyes, I'd have liked to drown voluntarily. Every time I looked at you I seemed to have drowned even deeper and deeper. I might have ever reached the bottom of   your heart ? I might...   When

. Hello nichols-- and welcome to English Forums. It is not good to give her a poem that you pretend is your own, so why not select a famous LOVE POEM ? .

I love my girlfriend so much, and i really really want to do something nice for her, but im no good at writing poetry. can you guys please please help me. i would so grateful. thank you.

Oh really, thanks.... If you like to read more, give me your e-mail adress addy,.... so I'll add you and I'll send you more:) F.S