By Marriage, Punctuation

kindly check my grammar,punctuation mark.thanks and god bless!Who is your life's role model?My life's role model is my sister.She's 2nd to the eldest in a brood of six girls in the family. I chose her not because she's my sister but because of what shemade us to be what am i...

Julie127 wrote: All: Would someone please help me? I am about to get married and want to send out my invitations. Would someone please tell me if the grammar and punctuation is correct? Two lives, two hearts,joined together in friendshipunited forever in love.It is with joy that we,David and...

Julie127 wrote:All: Would someone please help me? I am about to get married and want to send out my invitations. Would someone please tell me if the grammar and punctuation is correct? Two lives, two hearts,joined together in friendship,united forever in love.It is with joy that we,David and...

All: Would someone please help me? I am about to get married and want to send out my invitations. Would someone please tell me if the grammar and punctuation is correct? Two lives, two hearts,joined together in friendshipunited forever in love.It is with joy that we,David and Rhonda...

Hi Ler5018, I like this piece. The only thing I see is that you haven't taken the time to explain why Merriam-Webster's definition is off. You basically dismiss that definition offhand and expect your readers to buy yours. Just my two cents though. Defining Family When most people...

This is delightful, rcmarsi. I noticed a couple of things, some of which are probably typos: Agreeing that each one is no longer out for his or herself This should be "out for him or herself but are there to take care of and watch over the other this should be singular is is simply someone...

Gentlemen, gentlemen! Personal comments, distressing Shakespearian tags…I was on the point of moving this thread to the ‘Controversial Section’, where carbuncular youths would have smothered its lengthy, painstaking analyses with lurid misspelt rants about Virginity, Homosexual Marriage, and Why...

Hi, I was wondering if someone would be able to proof read my short essay that is due on Monday. Any help would be appreciated. I am pretty condifent about the words I have chosen, but I have a difficult time with punctuations. The requirements were 1 page summary essay with 3 sentences for...