By Metaphors, Pronouns

Hello, first time user here hoping his question is relevant! I have been offered a job recently involving the use of clear/accurate english, hard copy, easily constructed sentences etc and even though my grasp of the english language is basically sound and i can string a coherent sentence...

Hi, Where you have put semi-colons, I'd usually use commas. I have also suggested some other changes to your punctuation. My general advice is not to get into the habit of using semi-colons and colons. They can often make tyour meaning more obscure rather than more clear. You seem to have a...

Hello Morningrise, I've underlined some parts you may want to look at again: Morningrise wrote: Commentary on "To Be or not to Be" In this soliloquy Hamlet sparks an internal philosophical debate on the advantages and disadvantages of existence, and whether it is one's right to end his or...

I have to write a commentary on Hamlet's most famous soliloquy; would someone point out the errors and give me suggestions for a better writing? Thank you a lot. Commentary on "To Be or not to Be"In this soliloquy Hamlet sparks an internal philosophical debate on the advantages and...

Hi, you also need to work on the highlighted parts. Mrs. Smith’s political speech from July 2003 is given in rhetorical language and engaged with diverse stylistic devices to persuade the audience of his proposal. Smith focuses on the listener’s sense of coherence and on convincing them that...

Hello guys! I wrote this text but I am very unsure. So it would be very very very nice if you could correct it and proof it by grammer, spelling and if it is comprehensible. Eventually you could tell me if I shall write an conclusion (or if the introduction is enough). Please criticise the best...

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Well, I think it is a mistake to use rotten egg, because as I said, in English it refers to a person rather than a situation. And you already have mixed metaphors-- rotten egg and surreal trophy do not go together at all (nor do I have any idea what surreal trophy may mean-- beyond the fact that...