Hi, - Would you check for grammar and punctuation errors? Just some small edits as shown. You didn't ask about meaning or style, but parts of this I don't understand and parts of it seem awkward. I thought of an idea for a

Hi, The other electron microscopic findings were nonspecific myopathic alterations including: 1. myofibrillary degeneration with Z-line streaming in atrophic fibers; 2. myeloid bodies, membranous structures, and cell debris in rimmed vacuoles;

The other electron microscopic findings were nonspecific myopathic alterations including: 1. myofibrillary degeneration with Z-line streaming in atrophic fibers; 2. myeloid bodies, membranous structures, and cell debris in rimmed vacuoles; and 3.

Hi, may Allah make him better soon It's wrong because it does not a start with a capital letter, and has no punctuation at the end. Best wishes, Clive

A run-on is two main clauses joined by a conjunction with no comma: It was hot and it was cold. If you're implying that a comma is mandatory in such cases, and that failing to use one is a mistake, then I'm afraid I disagree.

Here's why I do or don't: 1. I have a limited amount of time 2. Long essays take a long time to read. 3. Long essays are often on topics I don't find interesting. When I find the topic interesting, I'm more likely to read it and

It should look like this, approximately: __________________ Date To <whom it may concern> I, <your friend's name> , wish to invite <your name> from <your city> , <your country> to stay with me from

- His going out at 7PM is the same as if he had gone out a 8PM. The meaning of the sentence is not quite there. You are saying his going out at 7 is the same as if he hypothetically went out at 8. I think you mean this: His going out

Both sentences are all right. Your own revision is an improvement over the original. I'm not sure about the phrase, "someone made money off it." That is commonly heard, and the dictionary sanctions "borrowed money off him,"

That said, I'm fine with sentences like that. The clauses are short, of similar nature, and have the same subject. The day "I came, I saw, I conquered" is labeled ungrammatical is the day I abandon prescriptive grammar entirely.