Hello: I work for an online proofreading and editing service. Please see my profile for more info. I won't revise your whole essay here, but I will show you the changes I would make in your first two paragraphs (which I have combined into

Hi Dora, the best way to produce a text is to learn from the pros. What you need are good samples and not only on the Internet. Seek books and further papers. Your text is way to long and I had some diffuculties to find any structure in it. After

Please help me with the motivation letter..specially in the forth paragraph..Any modifications and suggestions will be accepted..This letter answers the following question: " Please write a clear and detailed description of your academic

I didn't say your view was that of a novice, but that the standard 3-paragraph essay structure is designed to make essay writing easier for novice writers. I apologise if you felt insulted; that was not my intent. The 3 para format is also

The format is fine in my opinion. There is no rule that everything has to be 3 paragraphs long, that is just a simple format taught to novice essay writers to help them create a basic essay. A paragraph can be a single sentence if appropriate. The

Dear Mister Micawber I heartly thank you for your effort to correct my lengthy letter. I have cut short my essay by reducing one paragraph as per your suggestion. Kindly check my letter and suggest me Micawber. I am very eager to hear from you!

cand someone have a look at my motivation letter for a business and economics summer school in slovenia and give me some tips , please.... here it is Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to apply for the Ljubljana Summer School in 2007. I

If it is an essay, then you don't sign it. However, these applications usually ask for a motivation letter detailing the things you mention, and if so, you should treat it as a letter. I'm sure you can cut a couple of lines if you really

Yes, that is about the right length. It is in essence a motivation letter, but in essay form. Have a look at Post:102135 and Post:111482 .

Hi! I would like to go to USA for an internship. I received requested information about the internship and in the part called ‘Application Procedure’ I found that I need to write “a short essay answering the following question: What are your