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Hello there, recently i found a great guide in this forum: http://www.englishforums.com/English/WriteMotivationCoverLetter/bzlmn/post.htm I used it for writing my motivation letter for the Erasmus programme of computational Mechanics i'm

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Hi, You need to break this into several paragraphs in order to show the reader how you have organized your thoughts. If you don't, I doubt that anyone here will want to try to respond to this. Best wishes, Clive

Hi all! I have written this to the best of my ability. I'm pretty secure about the language part, as I'm bilingual, but it's the culture part that I want to check works. Some stuff I need to put in there, like the reason for the GPA

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Hi, You need to organize what you want to say into a number of shorter paragraphs, each dealing with a particular point that you want to make. Try that, and repost if you want to, OK? Best wishes, Clive