ALright, you're using totally inapropriate language. I mean WHAT you write is fine, but you have to represent the facts in more sophisticated way. Check out some really good personal statements on economy and finance: Go on

Anything wrong with the above letter ? Thanks for your advice.

Hi, I think the best way to approach this is to break it into 3 sections; why this subject; why you; and are you interesting and unique. So, I'd definitely expand on what you've got - I'd probably aim to write 1 - 2 pages of properly

Hi, I think the best way to approach this is to break it into 3 sections; why this subject; why you; and are you interesting and unique. So, I'd definitely expand on what you've got - I'd probably aim to write 1 - 2 pages of properly

hey guys!! i'm just working on applications for universities and i'm starting to feel desperate with all those motivation letters and stuff... i hope one of you can help me with this one and tell me if i made too many mistakes. ;) thanks a

Dear Anonymous, THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

My strong desire to take a Business-related course in Great Britain began three years ago when I realized I was attracted to this dynamic field of logic and consistent patterns. Having a broad interest in many subject areas, I now seek to become

Hello, I wrote this letter for international studies..I'd be very thankful if somebody could correct grammar and style in this letter. Thank you in advance :) My strong desire to take a Business related course in Great Britain dates back about

Hi, I've moved your post into the letters section. We won't write your letter for you but we will help. You can find lots of advice here about motivation letters and this is a good place to start, see Post:111482 . I would try to write your CV

Hello everybody, This is my sceond post on this great website. Nobody replied to my first post, and this is quite urgent. I just need someone to look over my motivation letter and give some feedback/tips/hints. I'm a South-African in the