Lebatonne: I have made a few suggestions. You can make this better by writing an outline of your main points. That will help you to avoid repetition. I am writing to apply for the Erasmus Mundus Master degree program in Global Studies.

. I have underlined some problem areas. One point-- usually, you should use simple past tense where you have used present perfect: Motivation Letter: The Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton College is according my target to develop my skills