Lebatonne: I have made a few suggestions. You can make this better by writing an outline of your main points. That will help you to avoid repetition. I am writing to apply for the Erasmus Mundus Master degree program in Global Studies.

Hi! I would need quick help for my motivation letter , I am applying for an internship! Thanks already and I appreciate your help!! Sarah Dear Dr. Smith, I am very interested in applying for an internship for spring 2009 in your department. I

Dear friends, Please correct my Motivation letter with your kind heart as soon as possible for which I shall be grateful to you. my mail id is --- best wishes MOTIVATION LETTER I am student of fifth year of engineering faculty of xxxUniversity

Hello everbody i am a new member and this is my second message,so i salute you all, i have some problemes due to my poor english in writing a Phd motivation letter that i want to send directly to proffessors, i will be thankfull for your

hello dear members i need help for my Phd motivation letter, could you please make the appropriate corrections .thank you Dear Sir The purpose of this letter is not only to describe my educational and professional background, but also

. I have underlined some problem areas. One point-- usually, you should use simple past tense where you have used present perfect: Motivation Letter: The Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton College is according my target to develop my skills

Can anyone help me please with this letter? Grammar and concordance for example? Motivation Letter: The Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton College is according my target to develop my skills on the financial field for a knowledge

Hello, I'll be really glad if somebody checks my motivation letter draft too. I've gone through this forum and copied some ideas and even senteces into that. I'm not sure if I can ask you also for grammar correction, but if somebody correct

GG, thank you for your reply. The above sentense is a very fascinating one but the position I would like to apply for, is actually a project manager with ability to develop simple videos and animations. I have misled you with my first post.

Hi, now I have some questions: * In the sentence " and already in high school they brought me to the decision that I would like to continue my future studies..." you placed "even" instead of "already", so we don't use already in this