http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aMotivation+LettersSearch results for 'tag:Motivation Letters' matching tag 'Motivation Letters'en-USXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/LettersOfMotivationUrgent/vbwbp/post.htm#671811Sat, 14 Feb 2009 00:04:39 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:671811anonymoushi every one, i need to write letter of motivation for a jpb, could u please give me some guide on how to go about it. Thank you Tracyhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/SampleFormalLetterWriting/5/bwljw/Post.htm#653073Sat, 24 Jan 2009 09:14:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:653073mister micawber. Dear Mr , Kindly send me the details of your profile so that I can go through it and get back to you as soon as possible . Regards, Clint Dear Sir / Madam, Kindly send some motivation letters as soon as possible, for which act of kindness I shall ever be grateful to you . Warm regards , Clinthttp://www.englishforums.com/English/SampleFormalLetterWriting/5/bwljw/Post.htm#653042Sat, 24 Jan 2009 06:37:27 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:653042anonymousDear Sir / Madam, Kindly send some motivation letters as soon as possible...... For which act of kindness i shall ever be greatful to you.... Warm Regards, Clinthttp://www.englishforums.com/English/CanAnyoneCheckMotivationLetter/gqzbz/post.htm#581225Tue, 28 Oct 2008 22:16:58 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:581225anonymousI started to rewrite your letter as it needs so much work on it. Unfortunately I managed to lose what I had written and as I have little time left now, all I can suggest is that you find someone with experience of writing such letters or simply someone who can write in a more fluent and grammatically correct manner. More concrete suggestions include: giving examples of the social and community related activities you have participated in; removing the reference to the motivation your parents give you (you need to show you are self motivated); remove extraneous comments (do they need to be told that Spanish "is the second common language in the world"?... and in any case do you think that it is wise to imply that you can spare...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterUndergraduateDegree-Uk/gqcmj/post.htm#580545Mon, 27 Oct 2008 00:20:12 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:580545alpheccastarsHi Iva: I wish you success in your studies! Your letter is quite good. I have added some modifications, and suggestions for you to think about. These letters are quite challenging to write! Hello, I have written a motivation letter for an undergraduate degree in UK. Would you please have a look at it and show me my mistakes. I would really apreciate this. Thank you in advance Dear Sir or Madam, Recently my country , Bulgaria , became a member of the European Community . and t T hat requires it to transform its economy according to the standards of the European Union. To make this difficult transformation, Thus the country needs new ideas and young professionals. (You might add here that you want to be one of these young...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterForMaster/gpxhz/post.htmWed, 22 Oct 2008 15:49:08 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:578991anonymousHi everybody, I have to write a letter of motivation for applying to a master program in business. I read some good letters in this forum and tried my best to write a letter myself. It woud be very helpful to get some feedback what you think about my text. It's the first draft and I know it's far from perfect. I hope to get some good advice. Thanks a lot in advance, Mike Dear Sir or Madam, I’m a German citizen and hereby apply for admission to study in the Master of XYZ program at XYZ University . In October 2008 I graduated from University with a Bachelor of Science Degree in Business Administration. My Bachelor-Thesis is about Affiliate-Marketing, an in Germany strong growing sector of E-Commerce. ...http://www.englishforums.com/English/LookingExamplesMotivation-Letters/vxdpc/post.htm#535042Tue, 01 Jul 2008 09:13:27 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:535042anonymousi'm in trouble my boss asked me to make motivation letter & i can't write it & i don't know how so can you help me? Omniahttp://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpPersonalStatement/gdcqc/post.htmWed, 21 May 2008 17:24:25 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:516717anonymoushey guys!! i'm just working on applications for universities and i'm starting to feel desperate with all those motivation letters and stuff... i hope one of you can help me with this one and tell me if i made too many mistakes. ;) thanks a lot!!! Honestly, I still did not know exactly what I wanted to study, when I was almost done with school. On one hand I was interested in the regular German program of Business Studies (BWL) but on the other hand this idea also did not convince me a hundred percent. For that reason I decided to go abroad to gain some international experiences and to develop my personality. That way, I realized how important it is for me, to learn about other cultures, their countries and to be...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterWouldAnyoneCheck/gcqmr/post.htmMon, 19 May 2008 19:46:22 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:515780anonymousHi to everyone, I found this forum very useful and all of you guys helped a lot. :-) according to your advices and sample letters I tried to write my own motivation letter. I need it to apply for two-month working experience in England (within my studies). Could I ask anyone to check my letter, please please please? I am not english so as I suppose there are gonna be many mistakes. Sorry in advance! Thanks a lot!!! :-) Katka, the Czech republic There you go... Dear Madam, I am hereby writing to apply for a two-month working experience in England, in which I am particularly interested. My name is Katerina Vaculikova and I am a 21 years old student in my second year of studies, at the St. Cyril and Methodius Faculty...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/gcxlq/post.htmSun, 18 May 2008 14:10:23 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:515201anonymousHello, I'm trying to apply to a famouse institution to student exchange (1 smester) and to write a motivation letter. I have never written any letter like this before, in no language. I would appreciate it a lot if you could tell me your opinion about what I wrote, wether on the grammer side or generally what should be in such letters. Here goes: Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings, My name is Keren W.. I'm currently a sophomore within the Industrial Design department at the Y in Y country. I am writing to apply for the students exchange program in the X, which appealed to me since I started researching for exchange programs. Visiting the X’s site, I have learnt that is it known for...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ShallWriteNameAddressRightSide-MotivationLetter/3/gbbjk/Post.htm#509488Sun, 04 May 2008 18:06:11 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:509488cliveHi, Send an application letter, for a job I presume, that begins with 'To whom it may concern' ? Surely you jest! For reasons that escape me, many of our learners here on the Forum seem endlessly fascinated with the idea of writing letters that start with 'To whom it may concern'. A search will find a great deal of discussion about this, with many people telling them again and again about how rarely and in what special and uncommon circumstances this phrase is used. Best wishes, Clivehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/ShallWriteNameAddressRightSide-MotivationLetter/2/gbbjk/Post.htm#508743Fri, 02 May 2008 23:54:45 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:508743feebs11Sorry. Letters not addressed to an individual are ended with "Yours faithfully", so that is what you need for your letter.http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterUniversity-Application/zqbmr/post.htm#497316Sun, 06 Apr 2008 17:08:34 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:497316george_tabulovHere is the letter. The purpose of this letter is not only to describe my educational and professional background, but also to focus your attention on how motivated I am to start Master of Science program in Clinical Research Administration offered by the University of Liverpool. I strongly believe that both my educational background and four years experience in the clinical research field make me a very good candidate for the program. I was graduated from York University (Toronto, Canada) in April 2004 with Bachelor of Science degree in Biology. Two months after the graduation I joined Clinical Research training program offered by Kriger Research Center. During this training I got familiar with GCPs (Good Clinical...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterUniversity-Application/zqbmr/post.htm#496713Sat, 05 Apr 2008 04:39:11 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:496713grammar geekHi Geoge, Welome to the forums. You seem to have misunderstood the purpose of this forum. We do not write letters for people, nor do we accept payment. What we DO do is help people how have written their own letters make them better, check for grammar mistakes, etc. Please write your letter and post it here, and then someone will help you edit it. I'm sure the admissions office wants to know YOUR reasons for wanting to enroll in the program, not the ones that I would make up for you.http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterConcerning-Internship/zxxlx/post.htm#490663Wed, 19 Mar 2008 13:38:17 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:490663mister micawber. Beware the dangers of verbosity. I am unfamiliar with the phrase 'fair-traded' but presume it is a word familiar to those in the import-export business.. I am writing about the possibility of obtaining work experience within the *** . Currently, I am studying International Business Administration and International Development. I will begin my diploma thesis for my economic studies next semester and complete the first part of my studies of International Development at the end of this semester. At university, I have gained insight into business affairs and questions of development and gained a clearer understanding of the complex interrelations of globalisation and its consequences . I am proficient in Word...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterConcerning-Internship/zxxlx/post.htmWed, 19 Mar 2008 12:48:12 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:490634anonymousCould you please check my motivation letter. Thank you very much! I am writing with reference to the possibility of obtaining work experience within the *** . Currently, I am studying International Business Administration and International Development. I will start to write my diploma thesis relating to my economic studies next semester and complete the first part of my studies of International Development at the end of this semester. During my time at university I gained a great theoretical and practical insight into both, business affaires and questions of development. I evolved a clearer understanding of the complex interrelations of globalisation and the...http://www.englishforums.com/English/UrgentScholarshipMotivationLetter-GiveThoughts/zkwvd/post.htmSat, 26 Jan 2008 17:08:12 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:469118nadia from bulgariaHello everyone ! I'd like to thank you all for the great forum and for carrying the mission to help others - it is amazing how many good people are there once you open your eyes for them. I have a Dutch scholarship motivation letter here - been writing it all day and I just can't tell which part is to be taken off already - they all seem so important to me right now. I took advantage of the letters of people who already received advice from members of the forum, but still my motivation letter needs to be revised. So I would be really grateful if someone can help me with this one - it is the first of its kind that I ever wrote and it is due Monday, so this really is a urgent case for me. Here it is: Dear Sirs: I am writing...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseScholarshipApplication/zwxhw/post.htmSun, 06 Jan 2008 11:19:28 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:461082showboyDear english forum team. My post was deleted for the reason that I posted twice. Please I did not post twice. I wrote two different letters and it was like I wrote two letters. The two letters are motivation letter and scholarship letters. I hope my post will not be deleted again. Thanks for understand. CAN SOMEONE HELP ME CORRECT MY LETTER PLEASE Dear Scholarship Committee: Please consider me Yale Scholarship. I have completed and enclosed the scholarship application form with the required annexes. I am applying to pursue a master’s degree in diplmacy at Yale. The program offered at the University givehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/FeebsCheckMotivationLetter-Please/zhnmm/post.htmSat, 22 Dec 2007 13:26:36 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:455969anonymousHey Feebs, I saw that u r good at checking motivation letters, so I would like to ask u, if it doesn't bothers u, to check my letter! Thank u very much )) Dear Sirs, I would like to apply for the Aberystwyth University , Wales , UK for the Theatre, Film and Television Studies in September, 2008. I have chosen film and television studies as the most preferable program and the following contains the reasons for that decision. First of all, at this moment I am studying at the New Bulgarian University , Sofia , Bulgaria , film and television studies and this is my first year. I am very inspirated and motivated to continue studying in this area, because I have very strong interests in all of the arts, especially in visual arts and...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterAsked/zgpqk/post.htmMon, 10 Dec 2007 15:15:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:451700claire*Dear members, I am a Dutch scholar in my exam year of grammar school. Upcoming Friday I need to have sent in all my application papers for university. I saw the excellent help offered by all of you to correct motivation letters and give advise. I just finished my motivation letter and I would like some comments on it. I am applying for a university which is very selective. It is an international orientated institute and offers broad education (I want to study litarature, political theory, business and maybe some law) It is very intensive studying and I will be living on campus if everything turns out oké and I will be accepted. But... only one out of five scholars get the chance to be accepted. So I can use all help offered by getting...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ISuggestionsMotivationLetter-Program/czkrp/post.htm#421564Thu, 20 Sep 2007 10:54:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:421564anonymoushello Kathrin, thank you very much for your response. I agree that it is very long, but in the application requirements they put 400 KB max limit for motivation letters, so I though that a good statement for them is about 250-300 KB in weight. Nonetheless, my statement is 2 pages long and weights less then 40 KB. I would love to communicate with your via email thank you very much, Dora (We ask visitors to register before contact information is permitted in posts.-- MM)http://www.englishforums.com/English/TooCreativeConventionalMotivation-Letter/vpgpq/post.htmMon, 27 Aug 2007 00:08:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:409784andr359I´m in the process of writing my motivation letters for admission to PhD in Finance programs in the US. I´ve found a handful of sample letters on the net. All of them are supposedly "winning" letters and follow this pattern: "I want to do a PhD because I want to do research and teaching at a leading business school. My research interests are ....... . I´m applying to *** school because of its strengths in ....... . I have finished a masters degree at YYYY school, where I learnt ....... . This prompted me to research the ........... under professor ....... . This experience has strengthened my skills in ...... which I feel are a powerful asset for the PhD program in ..... . I have also worked at CCCC where I have become a...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterBusiness-School/2/xqhz/Post.htm#403190Sat, 11 Aug 2007 14:01:53 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:403190nona the britWe will help you with your letter but you need to write it yourself as well as you can first. Read the letters in this section, and the sticky at the top on writing motivations letters, for good advice to get you started.http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterMotivationCorrect-It/vnxjr/post.htm#402369Thu, 09 Aug 2007 12:08:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:402369nona the britvery short for a motivation letter - or is this just a cover letter with your application. Try reading our 'Motivation Letters' advice sticky at the top of this thread. Dear Sir or Madam, I hereby wish to state my interest in a place on your Medical and Pharmaceutical Biotechnology course. I have chosen to study Biotechnology because I want to work in an international, innovative and modern business after completing my degree. I have a particular interest in the functionality of biological and medical processes, and this course would give me the opportunity to study these in depth. I am eager for knowledge and I am looking forward to learning about newly developed technologies for the investigation of important and...http://www.englishforums.com/English/LittleAboutMotivationLetter-Please/vlnhk/post.htmSat, 14 Jul 2007 12:01:25 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:392013anonymous( I apologize for my English) Hi to everyone. I am new here i was searching for some help in google and I found this great site with those helping forums. Here is problem... I have to write a motivation letter for a private academy.(a private academy for software developers) I am 19 yeas old and I don't realy have much experience, I just need a litle push with the start. I've written some motivation letters before but for a job position wich is much easier for me. Thank you.http://www.englishforums.com/English/DoesAnybodyEnglishReviseMotivation-Letters/dljcr/post.htm#390402Tue, 10 Jul 2007 15:22:19 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:390402italian studentIn only 1 day they sent me back my letter fixed.... I love that service and i suggest it to everybody.http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedBitterTruePlztakeLookMotivation-LetterCriticize/vlblw/post.htm#388768Fri, 06 Jul 2007 15:42:27 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:388768nona the britI didn't say your view was that of a novice, but that the standard 3-paragraph essay structure is designed to make essay writing easier for novice writers. I apologise if you felt insulted; that was not my intent. The 3 para format is also useful in other circumstances, of course, but not for everything. I certainly don't consider it a prerequisite for writing a formal letter. Motivation letters are often required to be of a length that would make the three paragraphs far too long and unwieldy. We agree that it's a pretty good letter overall though, so I'm sure anon will be fine.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAdvisePersonalStatement/vckzr/post.htm#347080Wed, 04 Apr 2007 07:34:27 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:347080nona the britWell, I'm no expert on motivation letters but I think this is a good one. It comes across as 100% honest on your genuine feelings and motivation (unlike most of these letters), and you have covered the important points. Good luck with your application. able to integrate into a research team I was awarded a French engineering degree in Electronics in September 2004 from *** and how to best exploit radio channel capacity. clients, mainly in Europe. and particularly of the expectations related to nano-robots. She works in the oil and gas industry could both achieve our professional and personal goals . community which appeals to me greatly .http://www.englishforums.com/English/ChatPhrasesYouHate/3/vrzvj/Post.htm#345595Sat, 31 Mar 2007 05:27:02 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:345595tammybabyFrancesca wrote: Of course Elfsleepy: www.thechatpage.com no cams, just people who want to meet friends from all over the world and learn English I myself didn't find it a good one, Francesca! Last time I visisted there, there was a girl flirting a guy, and she kept talking all the time like "Hey, where r u? Do you hate me?", etc. Noone could chat there! It's hard to find a good chatroom! Native speakers are not interested in learning English, of course. They wanna talk, not teach. Unless they are very kind, they won't help you anything with your poor language. If you cannot understand them, they simply say bye (if they are polite) or stop chatting without saying anything (if they are not). But if you simply go to a chatroom to...http://www.englishforums.com/English/TrickyOnlineApplication-Forms/vcccl/post.htm#344713Wed, 28 Mar 2007 21:47:26 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:344713cliveHi, I'd like to apply for a graduate program of a large global company. The problem is, that there's only an online-application form. So, I'm not sending a printed motivation OR cover-letter. After some personal questions there are 2 questions they ask with max. 4000 characters to fill in. The questions are: What qualities do you have that make you suitable for this position? What are your career goals and aspirations? I was writing motivation- and cover-letters before but I'm not sure this time if I'm right. 1) I don't know if these questions are mixing parts of a motivation and cover-letter. I guess so but I`m not sure. To some extent, but my advice is to forget about motivation letters and cover letters...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomoneAlsoCheckmyMotivation-Letter/dzrpp/post.htm#343697Mon, 26 Mar 2007 14:48:05 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:343697elpidijaOK. This is what I wrote for the weekend. Pleas don't mind my English mistakes because I write very bad. This is the first letter for stating why I want to attend the Summer School : Dear Sir/Madam This year in February I successfully complete my Law studies in my country. During the past four years, I studied different kind of Law areas but the most interesting area for me, was the one conected with International and European Law. After I visited a seminar for European Union in my country, I was even more sure that I find myselfe in this field and that is the direction of my perfecting and future. My country has a status of a candidate and I hope that after I aguire the necessary knoledge and experiense, I will be able to...http://www.englishforums.com/English/DifferenceBtwnCoverMotivationLetter/vbdzw/post.htm#340080Fri, 16 Mar 2007 21:31:52 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:340080grammar geekHi Baborchy, and welcome to the forums. In my experience, a cover letters goes with a resume to apply for a job. It says why your knowledge, skills, aptitudes, and experience make you a good fit for the company and the job. I've never had to write a motivation letter, but it seems to be part of applying for an academic program. Because such programs don't expect you to have already done the same program (the way a job might expect you to have similar experience to the job you are applying to), instead you need to show how your background and experience have motivated you to study hard and succeed in this program.http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterUniversity-Urgent/vbcjm/post.htmFri, 16 Mar 2007 00:00:10 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:339740anonymousPlease check this motivation letter and tell me what you think, i am not so good writing motivation letters, so it might be written very unprofessional. Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the Master’s Degree in International Economics and Business in the ... University. First of all, I would like to give you some background information about me, I am from Bulgaria, but since a child I have been living around the world because of my dads work, this helped me to learn some foreign languages and adapt very easy in an international environment. I have been studying in few Latin American countries one of them is Mexico where I graduated from high school, I got in touch with some very different cultures from my own and I...http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterForScholarship/vbrzp/post.htm#339202Wed, 14 Mar 2007 15:07:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:339202nona the britHi, I've moved your post into the letters section. We won't write your letter for you but we will help. You can find lots of advice here about motivation letters and this is a good place to start, see Post:111482 . I would try to write your CV in a way that isn't just lots of lists. Of course, some things you have to list out, but other sections, such as your personal attributes (virtues) can be written out fully and will create a better impression that way. Section headings: 'Backround' should be Work Experience and you should list the most recent job at the top and work back from there. Didn't the 'courses' lead to qualifications - yet you list qualifications separately. A lot of the 'qualifications' sound as though they are skills...http://www.englishforums.com/English/UrgentlyAdviceMotivationLetter/vrpxm/post.htmTue, 13 Mar 2007 09:37:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:338669bobaHi, I hope someone will read through this and give me comments...i am confident with my spellings and grammar (except, I am not sure whether subjects (eg. Molecular Genetics) are capitalized or written in small letters) but its more about the content. Does this include everything required in a motivation letter? Do I sound motivated and qualified? Do I make a positive impression? This letter is really important for me.. I would be happy about any comments! Thank you! Dear Dr ***, Herewith I would like to apply for the Prestige Master's Program Cancer Genomics and Developmental Biology at *** University starting in September 2007. I am a forth year student at the *** University. Currently I am working on my final thesis to...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadApplicationLetter-Embassy/vrvqj/post.htm#335577Sun, 04 Mar 2007 16:17:06 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:335577super sonicThank you. I've read some university motivation letters, but I can't find anything else to add to my writing. I am going to be a linguist(hopefully) and the only benefit I can get from this program is improve my English, or so I think. What else could you recommend that I write?http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadApplicationLetter-Embassy/vrvqj/post.htm#335541Sun, 04 Mar 2007 13:47:13 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:335541nona the britThey allow you up to a page for this so I suggest you use it. They specifically ask why this would be useful for your future career and you don't even mention this. Take a look at some of the university motivation letters on this forum for an idea of the sort of information you should be giving them.http://www.englishforums.com/English/DoesAnybodyEnglishReviseMotivation-Letters/dljcr/post.htm#320977Sun, 28 Jan 2007 15:19:31 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:320977ssmmYes, I have asked English -fix to revise my work for serveral times. On time and reliable and also done a very good job. But you should have your first draft and try to write it as your best, then I think they can help you to correct your grammer and change it to be more concise. But they do not help people if you do zero work.http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneCorrectMotivationLetter/dnqwl/post.htm#319739Thu, 25 Jan 2007 12:37:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:319739nona the britI've made some corrections for you and highlighted some further problems you need to correct. It's not a good idea to take parts from other letters. You university might check to see who has not written an original letter. For the past five years, I have studied computer science with specialization in multimedia programming in (Univ), (country). The goal of my studies was to understand the fundamentals of software programming and software engineering. During my studies at the university, I also learned about diverse topics such as computer security, human and computer interaction, and information system analysis. Information system analysis topic is very interesting because I am fascinated by the power of mathematical and computer...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ExtremelyAcademicMotivation-Letter/2/brrdp/Post.htm#319693Thu, 25 Jan 2007 10:34:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:319693anonymousHi, We don't send out personal replies by email and we don't provide letters for people. If you want us to help you will have to post your own letter here for advice. Hi there, I have been working out my head to come out with a letter of motivation to apply for admission into a foriegn university,am a holder of a BA in Geography and wish to further my education ,so one of my requirements include a letter of motivation,so i will be very happy if u can help me write one.I wish to go register in the Faculty of education and i need a motivation letter,i will be very happy if u can reply me through my e mail address Thanks for ur piece was very nice. Bye and waitinghttp://www.englishforums.com/English/QuestionsModeratorsFrequent-Posters/dnxpb/post.htm#318737Tue, 23 Jan 2007 08:52:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:318737nona the britHello Andrew, Thanks for the compliments. Yes, we are all volunteers. I don't think I want to admit how much time I spend here but for me it is a way to relax. I work for myself from home and I don't have anyone to go and have a coffee break with, so when I want to take a break for ten minutes or so I come over here. It's that or wander away from my office and end up just watching TV for the rest of the day (naughty!). We all come and help out here to varying degrees. Some people can do a lot and others can only help now and then, but it's all appreciated. We're happy for anyone to have a go at anwering the questions. You'll notice that a lot of the learners will also answer questions and it's a useful exercise for them and it's...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterUniversity/2/whlj/Post.htm#316507Wed, 17 Jan 2007 22:28:02 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:316507anonymousJareck wrote: If you look for a sample just look in the forum. There are several Motivation Letters including my own...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterMasters-Degree/dnvqj/post.htm#315938Tue, 16 Jan 2007 15:29:54 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:315938nona the britYou should sign all letters. Black or blue ink are best as other colours will be seen as eccentric. Problems highlighted for you. Dear Sir or Madam; I would like to apply for the Master's Degree in *** at *** starting in August 2007. I am studying in my last semester (studying on my thesis) in Bachelor of Engineering in Industrial Engineering with specialization in System Analysis. I would like to continue my study in order to gain applied knowledge and experiences by academic research in your master’s program. With increase need for flexibility of manufacturing systems, this tool is so beneficial for cost reduction. Besides I am so interested in optimization, improvement and development of manufacturing systems and processes....http://www.englishforums.com/English/NotAnotherMotivationLetter/dmpqv/post.htmThu, 11 Jan 2007 21:59:43 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:314130anonymousHi, this is the 7th version of the "letter of purpose" and 5th of the "studienvorhaben" (how to translate this??). I am applying for an exchange semester at the University of California, Berkeley and the selection is based on the marks of the first year. As I am only average (of all those who are allowed to apply :-) ) the application letters must give me an edge. If you were the professor, what else would you want to know? So please, pimp my letter! ***************************************** Letter of purpose: Dear Sir or Madam My name is **** and I am a 21 year old **** Biology student in the second year. I first took interest in life sciences during a hospital internship when I realized that even the best trained...http://www.englishforums.com/English/DoesAnybodyEnglishReviseMotivation-Letters/dljcr/post.htm#307261Tue, 26 Dec 2006 02:45:13 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:307261grammar geekSorry, I have no information for you on that. Did you try posting it here? It's hard to beat the cost. (And happy holidays to you too!)http://www.englishforums.com/English/DoesAnybodyEnglishReviseMotivation-Letters/dljcr/post.htmMon, 25 Dec 2006 23:13:08 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:307241anonymousDid anybody use English-fix to revise motivation letters? I am an newer on this forum. I have a motivation letter to be revised, and the time is limited. Does anybody know some information about English-fix? Such as, how long they can send the revised letter back to me, how is the service quality? something like that. Thank you very much! Merry Christmas!http://www.englishforums.com/English/CoverLetterCouldCheck/dlwqg/post.htmMon, 25 Dec 2006 19:11:57 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:307196ohyeahI have read some posts relevant to motivation letters in this forum and tried to follow the instructions. However, I also need your help to assess and check my cover letter. Please feel free to give me your suggestions and instructions. I greatly appreciate your help. Regards, Ohyeah. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for . I graduated in Mechatronics from University of Technology, the most renowned university in South of , on July 2006. I am proud to be one of the students of , the program supported by government which aims to train the top excellent students in . My aim is to work in an...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetter/dlvzm/post.htmWed, 20 Dec 2006 21:27:57 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:305859kavchikHello and best regards dear editors, After searching so long on internet to find some usefull information about writing a motivation letter I found this Forum. First of all I want to thank all those how are here to help people like me. I read about how to post and how to write letters here. I have already wrote my own and would like to ask your kind help to edit and improve it before I send to the institution where I applied. I paste the letter here under and hope to get an answer. I thank you in advance for your kind attention. Sincerely, Kaveh Dear Mr. -----, I am graduated from Kiev National University of Construction and Architecture in 2004 and I obtained a master degree in Architecture of Buildings and Structures....http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterUniversity/whlj/post.htm#301328Wed, 06 Dec 2006 19:57:03 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:301328jareckIf you look for a sample just look in the forum. There are several Motivation Letters including my own...http://www.englishforums.com/English/HiEveryoneCheckFirstAlot/djdcv/post.htm#297059Fri, 24 Nov 2006 09:40:55 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:297059nona the britThere are lots of motivation letters here on the forum and a thread just giving advice on these. Take a look for some idea about how to structure one of these letters. This is far too informal and short.