By Motivation letters, Clauses

Some suggestions included below - very best of luck with your application. Dear Sir or Madam, ( Is - most distinguished Ladys and Gentlemen or To Whom it May Concern... - better? No! But if you have a name, use the person’s name) I am writing to apply as an exchange student for the Sculpture...

dear lil´ruby rose, thank you for your reply and the correction of my letter of motivation! I have tried to write clear but I am not certain if it works. I have got my doubts about it... So I may ask you for another review to make sure whats behind all this. (or forgotten) It would be...

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply as an exchange student for the Sculpture Program at the National Academy of Arts for the winter semester 2007/08. I am an Austrian student attending my fourth semester of fine Arts explore how traditional and modern forms of sculpture can complement...

My friends,Yesterday, I was asked to send my motivation letter not later than next Monday.My situation is: I passed the entrance exam to MBA program in top 10 in Vietnam - my country & was sent as exchange student to its partner in France (only 3 scholarships are granted among 10 of us) . I...

Hi, I just modifed it. But now I cannot continus to simplize it while facing what I wrote. In my eyes, all of the words are useful. I know they are not as useful as I think, but I cannot stopping feeling that. I need your help, dear MountainHiker! In my letter,I'm trying to express my idea...