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Re: Please help with motivation letter

Mimoi2 wrote:Does anyone have any suggestions for this motivation letter? Anything would be really appreciated! Name Address1 Address2 Phone Date To Whom It May Concern: I would put a comma after the Concern rather than the semi-colon. With this letter I would like to express...

Re: motivation letter, please check it

(I forgot to log in again, sorry-- MM) Thank you, Yohanna, but you didn't find all of the spelling mistakes. Colon, not exclamation mark, after Madam from August, not form August Always two spaces after the period at the end of a sentence the capital, not a capital Faculty of Social...

Re: Can you please check my motivation letter? Thanks in advance..:)

To whom, not For whom Colon, not comma after concern for the patent, not for patent spell out small numbers: three in a good, not within good to European, not at European no hyphen: North American no capitals: the construction site gained in not gained into the no comma after...

Please help me with my Motivation Letter - the deadline is near

<>Please, could you help me with my motivation letter? Just to fill you in, I’m from Brazil and I’m applying for an exchange program with German universities. The deadline is 31st August (this Wednesday), at 23h in Brazil (that is, if I'm not mistaken, 3.00 am in London). I know...

Re: Please be so kind and correct my letter of Motivation

Hello Georg. The following words and phrases need repair: At first -- or omit it entirely have gave in UNIVERSITY2 -- wrong preposition September 2000 -- I think I am a little late in helping you. till - change to 'through' reasons -- needs a comma succeed in serving -- change to...

Re: Motivation letter???:)

Dear Ms/Mr Sincerely, Yanakieva Watch your spelling and capitalizations. No exclamation marks, smiley faces, or anything else. I have made some changes and put in some words for you. See if my words capture your intent. I love your enthusiasm and passion. If I am hiring someone, I...

Re: Motivation letter for an exchange.

Hi, I don't fully understand what you are trying to do. Dear Prof. xxx: MountainHiker

Re: Motivation letter for scholarship

Hi Jasmina, I greatly appreciate all the preparatory work that you have done. Architects have a language and manner of speaking and writing all their own. I find that they seem to combine both science and art into some strange alchemic brew. I sometimes just wish they'd cut to the chase and...

Re: Is there any one could help me to review my motivation letter?

faux air, A few points: 1) It is, Dear Sir or Madam: 2) Get rid of all your unnecessary words. You have a lot of "stuff" in there that is not required. "I believe the N+I program could help me to further strengthen my strong technical skills by acquiring cutting-edge expertise in...

Re: Motivation letter - after some years I don't speak in English

My name Address XXXXX Research XXXX Co-ordinators XXXXX, 30th October 2004 Subject: Application for the Project XXXXXXXX. Dear Sir or Madam: I am applying for the Project XXXXXXXXX as a XXXXXX Researcher. I graduated in Law at the University of XXX (Spain) in July 1999. From the beginning...