In Motivation letters^x, Commas^x, Prepositions^x

Lebatonne I have made a few suggestions You can make this better by writing an outline of your main points That will help you to avoid repetition I am writing to apply for the Erasmus Mundus Master degree program in Global Studies At the moment I am a student of a European Studies Master course...

Thank you for your comments I really get myself in trouble when deciding where to put commas because in portuguese we have different reasons to use them And it also seem that i missed that preposition class I will review it and post it again ok Daiane

Hello all wonderful members I am lucky because I found this community by chance it seems to be a great place I am writing a motivation letter for an organization offering a full year scholarship at an U S top unversity The application also includes a resume a study plan and two letters of...

Hello Georg The following words and phrases need repair At first or omit it entirely have gave in UNIVERSITY2 wrong preposition September 2000 I think I am a little late in helping you till change to through reasons needs a comma succeed in serving change to served Ordonnanzen staff needs a comma...