By Motivation letters, Logins

Hello! This forum is absolutly amazing. Thanks to all the moderators here. For some reason I cant login and get the confirmation letter, so I am just a guest. This is my motivation letter to Erasmus uni in Rotterdam. I'll appriciate if someone can review it and point out my...

Hello! I'm trying to write down a motivation letter in order to apply for a Master in International Business! Could u have a look and tell me what's your first impression? I have just login so now I am confident in a reply. Thanks a million Daniele Dear Sir/Madam Aiming at an international...