By Motivation letters, Personal statements

Re: Please check my personal statement (motivation letter)

Dear Anonymous, THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

Re: Please check my personal statement (motivation letter)

My strong desire to take a Business-related course in Great Britain began three years ago when I realized I was attracted to this dynamic field of logic and consistent patterns. Having a broad interest in many subject areas, I now seek to become as versatile as I can. Therefore, choosing a...

Please check my personal statement (motivation letter)

Hello, I wrote this letter for international studies..I'd be very thankful if somebody could correct grammar and style in this letter. Thank you in advance :)My strong desire to take a Business related course in Great Britain dates back about three years ago, realizing that this dynamic field...

Re: LETTER FOR SCHOLARSHIP

Hi, I've moved your post into the letters section. We won't write your letter for you but we will help. You can find lots of advice here about motivation letters and this is a good place to start, see Post:111482. I would try to write your CV in a way that isn't just lots of lists. Of course,...

Urgent Motivation letter for University in UK - Please help!!

Hello everybody, This is my sceond post on this great website. Nobody replied to my first post, and this is quite urgent. I just need someone to look over my motivation letter and give some feedback/tips/hints. I'm a South-African in the process of applying for a degree at a university in the...

Motivation letter HELP!! PLEASE!! :))

Hello, everybody! I am applying to universities this year, and I have to write an impressive personal statement or motivation letter but I am not sure if I am doing OK. Could you please revise my essay and recommend some amendments? I would greatly appreciate your help! Regards, Ina Here it...

one more motivation letter...please i need your help!

Hello everybody,I am Italian and I am applying for a very competitive Graduate Programme in the UK and, as usual, I have to write a personal statement to be attached to the application with my personal motivation. I have been through this forum and found plenty of useful suggestions and...

Re: Time is limited...help me with my motivation letter...THX!!!

Hi Reviver, Your CV is about your education to date. No-one expects you to have vast work experience, and you are applying for higher education, so obviously you don't have it yet! You don't need to say much about your primary school, except perhaps its name and how long you went there: e.g....

Re: Time is limited...help me with my motivation letter...THX!!!

No need to blush, Reviver. believe me, I don't know a single word of Chinese, so you are streets ahead of me! Are the CV and ML both going to the same place at the same time? If you have a full CV, you probably only need a brief "personal statement" in there.

Re: Please help me with my personal statement for university

Thank you nona for replying. I have redone my motivation letter, trying to "sell myself to the university" more rather then telling my past. Any more pointers that i should consider. Thank you so much for all your help. oh yea before i forget, they emailed from the uni telling me the...