In Motivation letters^x, Plurals^x

You do sound motivated and you seem to have covered most things. The only aspect that is missing is what do you intend to do with all this learning in the long term? What sort of career are you aiming at? Grammatically, you have some problems with articles, for example final thesis to obtain a...

"to get in touch with" is only used in context of a person - yes. Not sure about the 'made me encounter' either, grammatically ok, but doesn't sound natural. I think it's the 'made' part, it sounds as though they dragged you there kicking and screaming. Maybe 'parents exposed me to..' One among...

These words or phrases need correction: Madam or Sir was graduated bachelor International business the xxx University pre master’s your University interest to experiment Finland (needs a comma) I am speaking Finish a mother tongue (should be plural) I always lived (verb aspect) used to...

Hello Bensou, and welcome to English Forums. The following words and phrases need repair: providing thanks of organization perfect -- this is a good word, but unbelievable; choose another although a new surrounding -- should be plural, but is not a point to be put forward in a motivation letter...