By Motivation letters, Promotions

Re: URGENT ATTENTION BOSS: WOULD YOU PLS COMMENT ON 'MY MOTIVATION LETTER'

I have reviewed your letter again, with suggested changes in bold. I cannot follow all your colours and interjections, so I have merely amended as I think best (and some of them are improvements on my own previous suggestions):Program Code: MKT2345 February 2, 2008 Dear Sir/Madam: I am...

Re: URGENT ATTENTION BOSS: WOULD YOU PLS COMMENT ON 'MY MOTIVATION LETTER'

Thankyou very much Mister Micawber! The revised letter is as following after your suggested changes. and few additions from myside. I applied for three diffenent Master programs. International Marketing, Leadership Management and Entrepreneurship & Innovation. Some Paras need to be customised...

Re: URGENT ATTENTION BOSS: WOULD YOU PLS COMMENT ON 'MY MOTIVATION LETTER'

I have struck out unnecessary or inappropriate verbiage, made some corrections (in bold). You may also have to fix the sentence structure to correct for my deletions.February 2, 2008 Director of the Program Department of ABC University of ABC Dear Dr Smith:I am writing to apply for the Master’s...

URGENT ATTENTION BOSS: WOULD YOU PLS COMMENT ON 'MY MOTIVATION LETTER'

I AM SENDING THE MOTIVATION LETTER AFTER 2-3 DAYS! PLS GIVE YOUR COMMENTS TO MAKE IT ACCURATE N PERFECT! THIS FORUM IS DOIN A GREAT JOB!.... JUST WELDONE! Director of the Program Department of ABC University of ABC February 2, 2008 I am writing to apply for the Master’s Programme in ***. ...

Motivation letter for marketing master's studies, need an honest opinion

UNIVERSITY OF ***, Faculty: Marketing Communication Sciences. Dear Sir / madam or admissions board: One of the many things I learned over the few years I’ve worked in the private and public sector is that in order to go furtherin my career I need to obtain a master’s degree....

Re: Motivation letter for University

Comments in pink, other problems/errors in yellow. Lots of missing articles here. Good luck with your application though, the structure of your letter looks ok. It is a good idea to state why you want to do this particular course and not all the other human rights courses, and if this is to study...

Motivation letter for University

Please give me some feedback on this letter of motivation. I am witting to apply for the postgraduate studies starting in the fall of 2007. I found that the Master’s programme in the Human Rights corresponds well with my future plans in doing practical and legal work for human rights...

Re: questions for the moderators and frequent posters

Hello Andrew, Thanks for the compliments. Yes, we are all volunteers. I don't think I want to admit how much time I spend here but for me it is a way to relax. I work for myself from home and I don't have anyone to go and have a coffee break with, so when I want to take a break for ten minutes...

CV+MOTIVATION LETTER

Hello everybody! I seriously need some help for correcting my motivation letter and my curriculum vitae. I have never done one before, so if you have any comments or you find any mistakes PLEASE let me know. I would definitely appreciate that! Thanks, Sara P.S. Do you have any suggestions for...

pls correct this motivation letter for a masters programme in human rights

I believe that International Human Rights standards can only be effectively implemented if they are known. Known by those who are soliciting for their rights and known by legal practitioners like me,who are to guarantee the protection of such rights or provide for redress when those rights are...