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Hello Georg. The following words and phrases need repair: At first -- or omit it entirely have gave in UNIVERSITY2 -- wrong preposition September 2000 -- I think I am a little late in helping you. till - change to 'through' reasons -- needs a comma succeed in serving -- change to...

My name Address XXXXX Research XXXX Co-ordinators XXXXX, 30th October 2004 Subject: Application for the Project XXXXXXXX. Dear Sir or Madam: I am applying for the Project XXXXXXXXX as a XXXXXX Researcher. I graduated in Law at the University of XXX (Spain) in July 1999. From the beginning...