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Re: First time writing a motivation letter. Need you help

Pilot123 — Wed, 16 Jan 2008 13:38:57 GMT

Zomg sorry guys, I made a huge spelling mistake in the title :-D I didn't write the "R" in "YOUR".

Need help for motivation letter

Babuvenkatesh — Tue, 01 Jan 2008 08:10:48 GMT

I am applying for master course in physical activity. For that I have written a motivation letter. I would be greatful if anyone go through the letter and correct any grammer or spelling mistakes and give suggestions for further modification

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you to apply for the Master of Physical activity. I am a -------------- with three and half years of experience. I am having great interest in treating disabled patients from my studentship. One of my friends in schooldays was a handicapped person. By seeing his sufferings, I thought to do something for the disabled people which motivated me to select the ----------- profession. During my internship I was posted in ---------- (NGO aided by Canada), where I treated many disabled and Special children which further intensified my desire of making disabled to differently abled children.

Since I passed out the course as a best outgoing student, I was given an opportunity to work as a ------------ in my mother institution (--------Hospital and College of ------------). In my profession I have treated and treating many neurologically affected patients (spinal cord injury, stroke) and disabled patients. When I treat disabled patients I always try to make them as independent as possible and modify the activities to lead a better life. So I encourage them to take part in social, recreational and physical activities. As the facility is less in our area, it was difficult for me to make them take part in physical and sports activities. My voluntary service for ------- scheme (------- Project) to findout disabled children from village schools and various free medical camps with medical specialists grow my interest in rehabilitation of disabled patients. From these experiences I come to know that most of the rehabilitation services in our country are aimed to improve the independence of patient only in Activities of Daily Living. For the rehabilitation to be complete it should make the patient to participate in physical, social and recreational activities. As I am having very little knowledge in this area, I wish to learn a master course in rehabilitation. Though I update my clinical knowledge by attending various professional development programs, I thought to study master course, which help me to treat these patients with full satisfaction. As my financial background is low to support the master course I was searching for the scholarship courses in -------- in internet. When I saw this course I got a great interest in it, as it is fulfilling my desire of higher education in interesting field.

I am very eager to study a course in Europe which is my favorite place for higher education. When I come to know that part of this study is in ------------------, I am very happy that, it is one of the oldest and top ten rated university in Europe and my friends spoken very highly of medical education in Europe.

Accomplishing this master program will enable me to achieve a broader knowledge on treatment of disabled patients. It will also grant me a international experience and treatment method. On obtaining this masters program I am planning to increase facilities in our area to rehabilitate the disabled patients to their fullest possible capacity. Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive reply.

Yours truly,

Need help for motivation letter

Anonymous — Tue, 01 Jan 2008 07:55:47 GMT

I am applying for the master course in physical activity. For that I have written a motivation letter. I would be greatful if any one go through the letter and correct any grammer and spelling mistakes and give sugessions for further modification.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you to apply for the Master of Physical activity. I am a ----------- with three and half years of experience. I am having great interest in treating disabled patients from my studentship. One of my friends in schooldays was a handicapped person. By seeing his sufferings, I thought to do something for the disabled people which motivated me to select the --------- profession. During my internship I was posted in -------- (NGO aided by Canada), where I treated many disabled and Special children which further intensified my desire of making disabled to differently abled children.

Since I passed out the course as a best outgoing student, I was given an opportunity to work as a ----------- in my mother institution (-------- Hospital and College of -----------). In my profession I have treated and treating many neurologically affected patients (spinal cord injury, stroke) and disabled patients. When I treat disabled patients I always try to make them as independent as possible and modify the activities to lead a better life. So I encourage them to take part in social, recreational and physical activities. As the facility is less in our area, it was difficult for me to make them take part in physical and sports activities. My voluntary service for ------- scheme (central Govt. Project) to findout disabled children from village schools and various free medical camps with medical specialists grow my interest in rehabilitation of disabled patients. From these experiences I come to know that most of the ------- services in our country are aimed to improve the independence of patient only in Activities of Daily Living. For the rehabilitation to be complete it should make the patient to participate in physical, social and recreational activities. As I am having very little knowledge in this area, I wish to learn a master course in -------------. As my financial background is low to support the master course I was searching for the scholarship courses in Europe in internet. When I saw this course I got a great interest in it, as it is fulfilling my desire of higher education in interesting field.

I am very eager to study a course in Europe which is my favorite place for higher education. When I come to know that part of this study is in ------------------I am very happy that, it is one of the oldest and top ten rated university in Europe and my friends spoken very highly of medical education in Europe.

Yours truly,

Motivation letter for Head of Finance

Anonymous — Sat, 15 Sep 2007 00:59:48 GMT

I will be greatful if someone can help me to review the spelling of this motivation letter. It is for a job application purpose. The ad askes for a Letter of Motivation which I think it is the corresponding Cover Letter in Europe, since the ad was published by an Austrian Company.

So please be so kind and check my writing and grammar making the corresponding changes in order it works in the European market.

Dear Mrs. Reynier:

I am writing in application for the position of Head of Finance and Operations to service in the finance department of (Company Name). I am very interested in working with a multinational company within an international environment. You will find my background and experience directly applicable to your needs and I have enclosed my resume for your review.

I have a bachelor degree in Finance and Accounting from University of Concepcion, Chile completing it in November 1996. In Addition, I have developed my professional skills by accomplishing several training courses provided by professional institutions, which helped fine-tune my ability to work hard and with sincerity, persistence, motivation, and resilience.

My experience in finance and internal controlling spans 10 years, with the last four as General Accountant in multinational companies, gathering knowledge in financial reports submissions to the headquarters prepared in compliance with US-GAAP and more recently under IFRS regulations. Furthermore, I have several experience in budgeting process, variance analysis, inventory management and ERP system implementation.

I believe working in a reputed company like (name of the company) will provide me an excellent opportunity for my career growth. I am confident that if provided the open position to serve at your company, I will prove myself to be an important asset through my dedication, sincerity and highest level of professionalism. Also, I hope my strong analytical ability, interpersonal relationship, theoretical and practical knowledge will help me to meet the selection criterion.

In addition to my experience, I have excellent command in English being fluent, both written and spoken with an advance level, having one year of studies in Toronto Canada.

I would appreciate the opportunity to interview for this position, as I am certain that a face-to-face meeting would more fully reveal my positive attitude and ability to meet your expectations. I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely Yours,

Re: need only bitter true.plztake a look at my motivation letter and critic

Triquediqual — Fri, 06 Jul 2007 14:25:24 GMT

Excellent Letter!

It was comfortable to read and you made your point in the utmost of brilliance. You have directed your thought in an appropriate manner throughout the work leading to a suitable if wonderful conclusion in your evaluation. However, you have asked for criticism and there are some.

1. Layout is Horrendous. I don't know how many people forget to layout their work. You have 6 paragraphs ( if you could call them that ) and some are only 2 lines! I personally think you should keep all the content but make three good sized paragraphs by combining two, one large and one small. Be careful though as you don't want to mix two that are completely on different points.

2. Line 1 is okay and should be left there as a suitable beginning although I am normally critical of them, in this case it's okay.

3. There are a lot of silly spelling and grammer mistakes in the first few paragraphs as well which disrupts flow.

Apart from that, it's great.

Triquediqual

Re: Kinldy check my motivation letter and correct if posible. Thx in advnce

Shanawaz Mohammed — Mon, 04 Jun 2007 06:40:27 GMT

Dear Mister Micawber

I heartly thank you for your effort to correct my lengthy letter. I have cut short my essay by reducing one paragraph as per your suggestion. Kindly check my letter and suggest me Micawber.

I am very eager to hear from you!
Regards
Shanawaz Mohammed

Statememt of Purpose

I am currently employed in a position with tremendous opportunity for advancement in Bangalore at Molecular Connections Pvt. Ltd. I have been recognized and lauded for my knowledge of biochemistry, and I enjoy intellectual interactions with my Ph.D. colleagues; I am trained to think logically and solve problems. Consistently my peers place me in a leadership position, and I have a reputation for performing well beyond what is expected. Still, I feel an empty place in my life. While my friends and colleagues do not understand my decision to leave this rewarding career, I know that I have no choice if I am to pursue my long-term goal and my childhood dream: to teach and to publish research. I think that I have made the right decision, although my friends think I am sacrificing certain career advancement for superfluous training. What they do not understand is that I will derive even greater satisfaction from pursuing a doctoral degree than by earning a higher salary and advancing in my present career. By pursuing a graduate degree, I will have the priceless opportunity to realize my dream.

Initially, I saw my current job as an valuable opportunity to further my learning experience, and indeed, over the past two years, I have acquired a broad knowledge of drug discovery, chemoinformatics and bioinformatics.But perhaps more importantly, my current job has contributed less toward my long-term career objective of teaching, and conducting and publishing research that would contribute to my field of specialization. I am driven more by my dreams than money and the prestige of a commercial career: I also hope to contribute to society by disseminating my knowledge as an academician.

A research career in neurobiology is my life goal. In my opinion, there is no scientific study more vital to man than the study of his own brain. Neuroscientists have learnt a considerable amount about the functioning of the brain, but they admit that it remains one of humanityâs most enduring mysteries. I have clearly envisaged my path in neurobiological research and am convinced that the stakes in this new and fast growing field are critical. I would like to make my contribution to unravelling the mysteries of neurobiology.

Excited by the idea of becoming a scientist since I was a child, my interest in pursuing graduate studies intensified during my undergraduate education and my initial research. Having a thirst for biology, I pursued my degree in Biochemistry at prestigious Vysya College, although I had opted for computer science in secondary school. With a chemistry background, I excelled in my undergraduate studies. My core subject became very interesting under the tutelage of an experienced faculty. I was even allowed to take biochemistry for twelfth grade students in my eleventh year. That opportunity secured me a 1st grade in Human Physiology and Cell Biology.

As a day scholar, I worked as a part-time trainee in their renowned clinical laboratory without salary. There I learnt molecular techniques and research approaches in molecular biology. I have undergone a laboratory course exclusively for electrophoresis techniques at the Electrophoresis Institute. My quest for advancement in biological sciences encouraged me to undertake clinical laboratory work at Gopi Hospitals. "One personâs life influences the lives of an unbelievable number of people," goes the saying, one of the most important lessons I have learnt. This experience taught me to be a responsible person and boosted my confidence. It also taught me that the basis for good work is self-reliance and very importantly, time management. Not all of these three years were free of shortcomings. I learnt [you used this spelling initially, and you should be consistent] to accept both criticism and praise with a positive frame of mind. My work involved organizing various events, which gave me the opportunity to work and interact with various kinds of people. This was a very gratifying experience for me, which I feel will stand me in good stead in the future.

I pursued my postgraduate degree in Biochemistry in order to gain basic eligibility for research. The core subject inspired me to carry the basics of biochemistry to undergraduate students, and I involved myself in self-help initiatives such as paper and poster presentations at various state-level seminars. In partial fulfillment of my postgraduate degree, I worked at the Central Leather Research Institute (CLRI-ADYAR) in the Department of Bioproducts. There, I worked on protein purification and its characterizations, which provided me a clear perspective of research and aided me in acquiring other molecular techniques.

As a prerequisite for attaining a PhD in Neurobiology, I have undergone intense training at the National Institute of Mental Health and Neuro Sciences by attending a course in Laboratory Animal Management. This course gave me practical exposure to isolating the brain and its major components. Drug administration and sample collection techniques with laboratory animals are fundamental parts of this course.

My journey so far, from undergraduate to current occupation, has been carefully planned. I believe that my serious intention to study further, my work experience in laboratories and academic background in various areas of biochemistry, will be very beneficial for my research work in your laboratory.

Re: Kinldy check my motivation letter and correct if posible. Thx in advnce

Mister Micawber — Fri, 01 Jun 2007 14:11:56 GMT

Ah, I found it myself. Here you are:

Statement of Purpose

I am currently employed in a position with tremendous opportunity for advancement in Bangalore at Molecular Connections Pvt. Ltd. I have been recognized and lauded for my knowledge of biochemistry, and I enjoy intellectual interactions with my Ph.D. colleagues; I am trained to think logically and solve problems. Consistently my peers place me in a leadership position, and I have a reputation for performing well beyond what is expected. Still, I feel an empty place in my life. While my friends and colleagues do not understand my decision to leave this rewarding career, I know that I have no choice if I am to pursue my long-term goal and my childhood dream: to teach and to publish research. I think that I have made the right decision, although my friends think I am sacrificing certain career advancement for superfluous training. What they do not understand is that I will derive even greater satisfaction from pursuing a doctoral degree than by earning a higher salary and advancing in my present career. By pursuing a graduate degree, I will have the priceless opportunity to realize my dream.

Learning gives me a sense of accomplishment and a world of satisfaction. The more I learn, the more fulfilled I feel. I do not learn solely to apply my knowledge in a practical setting; instead, it is the quest for knowledge and the challenge of learning that motivates me. Initially, I saw my current job as an valuable opportunity to further my learning experience, and indeed, over the past two years, I have acquired a broad knowledge of drug discovery, chemoinformatics and bioinformatics. I have also gained experience in annotation of research articles and patents for cellular targets like ion channels, GPCR, nuclear receptors, cellular enzymes (kinase, protease, phosphodesterase, viral enzymes), etc.

But perhaps more importantly, my current job has contributed less toward my long-term career objective of teaching, and conducting and publishing research that would contribute to my field of specialization. I am driven more by my dreams than money and the prestige of a commercial career: I also hope to contribute to society by disseminating my knowledge as an academician. An inspired teacher can bring out talents, encourage innovation and nurture a new generation of scientists and philosophers. I have always wanted to inspire others through the teaching process in addition to conveying knowledge through the curriculum.

A research career in neurobiology is my life goal. In my opinion, there is no scientific study more vital to man than the study of his own brain. Neuroscientists have learnt a considerable amount about the functioning of the brain, but they admit that it remains one of humanityâs most enduring mysteries. I have clearly envisaged my path in neurobiological research and am convinced that the stakes in this new and fast growing field are critical. I would like to make my contribution to unravelling the mysteries of neurobiology.

Excited by the idea of becoming a scientist since I was a child, my interest in pursuing graduate studies intensified during my undergraduate education and my initial research. Having a thirst for biology, I pursued my degree in Biochemistry at prestigious Vysya College, although I had opted for computer science in secondary school. With a chemistry background, I excelled in my undergraduate studies. My core subject became very interesting under the tutelage of an experienced faculty. I was even allowed to take biochemistry for twelfth grade students in my eleventh year. That opportunity secured me a 1st grade in Human Physiology and Cell Biology.

As a day scholar, I worked as a part-time trainee in their renowned clinical laboratory without salary. There I learnt molecular techniques and research approaches in molecular biology. I have undergone a laboratory course exclusively for electrophoresis techniques at the Electrophoresis Institute. My quest for advancement in biological sciences encouraged me to undertake clinical laboratory work at Gopi Hospitals. "One personâs life influences the lives of an unbelievable number of people," goes the saying, one of the most important lessons I have learnt. This experience taught me to be a responsible person and boosted my confidence. It also taught me that the basis for good work is self-reliance and very importantly, time management. Not all of these three years were free of shortcomings. I learnt [you used this spelling initially, and you should be consistent] to accept both criticism and praise with a positive frame of mind. My work involved organizing various events, which gave me the opportunity to work and interact with various kinds of people. This was a very gratifying experience for me, which I feel will stand me in good stead in the future.

I pursued my postgraduate degree in Biochemistry in order to gain basic eligibility for research. The core subject inspired me to carry the basics of biochemistry to undergraduate students, and I involved myself in self-help initiatives such as paper and poster presentations at various state-level seminars. In partial fulfillment of my postgraduate degree, I worked at the Central Leather Research Institute (CLRI-ADYAR) in the Department of Bioproducts. There, I worked on protein purification and its characterizations, which provided me a clear perspective of research and aided me in acquiring other molecular techniques.

As a prerequisite for attaining a PhD in Neurobiology, I have undergone intense training at the National Institute of Mental Health and Neuro Sciences by attending a course in Laboratory Animal Management. This course gave me practical exposure to isolating the brain and its major components. Drug administration and sample collection techniques with laboratory animals are fundamental parts of this course.

My journey so far, from undergraduate to current occupation, has been carefully planned. I believe that my serious intention to study further, my work experience in laboratories and academic background in various areas of biochemistry, will be very beneficial for my research work in your laboratory.

Overall, your letter is very verbose, Shanawaz, and I fear that they may think you will talk them to death if they accept you. Nevertheless, I have cut and/or simplified very little of your letter. I suggest that you go through it again yourself, and see if you cannot eliminate at least a paragraph or so.

Re: Motivation Letter, a little help would be greatly appreciated

Grammar Geek — Wed, 30 May 2007 13:23:36 GMT

Don't you already have to have a law degree to get an LLM? If so, shouldn't you mention that? Don't start with your mother, start with YOU. I want to pursue an LLM in European law for a number of reasons. I have grown up with an international perspective... [more]. Additionally,... [more]. I know that your institution is the right one for me because...

You must check your spelling!

Dear Sir or Madam,

As my mother grew up in Vietnam, and then lived in Lebanon, - how does this affect YOU if your mother grew up in one place and moved somewhere else?

I received a rather opened - not the right word. broad, perhaps? What do you mean to say?

education, which taught me to appreciate differences and led me to orient my interests toward the international sphere. Having had the opportunity to follow a former diplomat courses what do you mean "follow a former diplomat courses"? Can you say this another way?

during high school, I soon became convinced that my vocation was to work in the international field.

Now that international current affairs show European construction benefiting from a new impetus, What do you mean? What does this have to do with you? What is the new impetus that you refer to?

I think that my country, through its ~~particular~~ geopolitical position, will always need more foreign officers specialized in community law.

The high quality of your program, the legal tradition of the Nederlands - check spelling - this isn't the US spelling in International Law and the presence of numerous international organizations nearby have convinced me that your LLM program constitutes the ideal means to deepen my knowledge from this perspective.

help! grammer and spelling, thanks (motivation letter)

Rena6851 — Thu, 19 Apr 2007 01:59:35 GMT

What attracts you to the position you have applied for? Why do you want to work for ****? What do you think you will be doing in your first Year at ****?
(Please complete in a maximum of 250 words)

I choose to work for with Public Sector Audit team as I was attracted by the clients, which around our daily lives but keep mystery in operations, such as education and hospital. I want to work with these clients to take insight in it and want to be involved in the projects that would have a real impact on peopleâs daily life. Also, ****'s Public Sector Audit team has traditionally been a small department, which would let me quickly know the team and work more efficient.

**** attracted me for a serial of facts: it was the fastest-growing of the âBig Four Auditâ in 2005, it achieved global revenue of US$16.9 billion in 2006, grew 9.6% from 2005, it is the only one of âBig Four Auditorâ which the largest revenue region is outside America, its US$8.82 billion revenues are attributed by EMEA (Europe, Middle East, and Africa). Also, **** is known as its attitude towards employees: it treats every single people with respect, it offers staffâs training around professional qualification; it encourages people to be themselves and realise their potential. Therefore, **** was voted the Sunday Times 2006 âBest Big Company to work forâ and stood in Number 3 in The Times Top 100 Graduate Employers.

As a first year trainee, I assume to start from basic things, such as checking whether facts and figures are meet with clientsâ claimed, and learn experiences through working with different teams at variety clients. Still, most of time will spend on studying ACA, which is recognised worldwide as the premier financial business qualification.

Re: "Chat" phrases you hate

TammyBaby — Sat, 31 Mar 2007 05:27:02 GMT

Francesca wrote:
Of course Elfsleepy: www.thechatpage.com no cams, just people who want to meet friends from all over the world and learn English

I myself didn't find it a good one, Francesca! Last time I visisted there, there was a girl flirting a guy, and she kept talking all the time like "Hey, where r u? Do you hate me?", etc. Noone could chat there! It's hard to find a good chatroom! Native speakers are not interested in learning English, of course. They wanna talk, not teach. Unless they are very kind, they won't help you anything with your poor language. If you cannot understand them, they simply say bye (if they are polite) or stop chatting without saying anything (if they are not).

But if you simply go to a chatroom to learn English with people have the same purpose. They are (all) non-native speakers. Their English, even good, is not really natural. And you find that you don't want learn their English, anyway. Non-native speakers wanna seek native ones to practise English but sometimes, native speakers find that non-native ones seem to take advantages from them. And of course, they stop chatting! I've got several emails with resume/motivation letters attached from many non-speaking English countries, they ask me to correct them (even I'm not a native speaker!). Of course I don't have time to do that, unless they are from people I already had some chats with and I consider as friends. I can help if they ask me when chatting with me, but not a couple of long letters to check, even spelling mistakes. I get sick of them! I want to make friends, have some chit-chat, cultural exchanges... but NOT teaching English! My English is not that good!

So if you wanna talk with native speakers, try to improve your English by yourself first, so at least you can understand them in most of situations. They are willing to tell you what some slangs mean but not most of the time. I myself don't like the question "What does it mean?" all the time when I just use very simple English. When we go to a chatroom, just simply we want to have some gossips, to have fun. That's it! None wanna be an English teacher, neither do I. Teaching is some thing quite stressful, not that fun to do in free time. Anyway, best of luck for your English study! ^^

Cheers,
-Tammy