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Re: Please help me with my motivation letter , please its urgent

Anonymous — Mon, 21 Jul 2008 23:17:50 GMT

Hi,

I think the best way to approach this is to break it into 3 sections; why this subject; why you; and are you interesting and unique. So, I'd definitely expand on what you've got - I'd probably aim to write 1 - 2 pages of properly spaced A4. The most important thing to remember is that this may be your only opportunity to sell yourself to the admissions tutor. And it's also worth bearing in mind that itâs a double edged sword â while a great supporting statement will impress, a poor personal statement will damage your chances of success.

Why this subject? Ideally you should sum up your feelings for a subject in a short, snappy sentence. You need to really capture the reason why you are interested in the subject.

Why you? You will need to show that you would be a good student and are suited to the subject you have chosen.

Are you interesting? What experiences have you had that would bring something extra to the university community

This is just a brief answer to your question. Check out this interesting article on writing university supporting statements.

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Daniel

Re: Please help me with my motivation letter , please its urgent

Anonymous — Mon, 21 Jul 2008 22:49:27 GMT

Motivation letter for a Ph.D.

djoe — Fri, 04 Jul 2008 11:45:29 GMT

Hi everyone,

I have written a draft for a motivation letter, which i'll include in a Ph.D. application.

Because, at the moment, I don't have acces to someone from whom I can get feed back, I'll post it here, and hopefuly someone will be able to read it and comment.

Thank you in advance to whom might read it.

To whom it may concern,

Application for the *** Ph.D. Program

The present letter will explain the reasons why I'm applying to a Ph.D.
degree.

By enrolling on the undergraduate course on Systems and Informatics
Engineering at the *** University, I came in contact with different
paradigms, technics and methodologies for software development.

In the early years of my studies at the university I was a student of
Professor *** which introduced
me to the basis of Formal Methods for software development and verification.

Soon I discovered the interest for Formal Methods, and
got involved in the Grand Challenge in Computer Science initiative.
This experience gave me a taste of what research in Formal Methods is.

Before terminating the under-graduation I entered another challenge like
project, forming a team of students like my self for the ***
contest, under the category of Software Design.
We made it through to the *** finals with a project for a
distributed environment where mobile devices could be used to increment the
contents already available on social data sources like Wikipedia, and others.

Enrolling in the MSc on Informatics at *** was a natural choice in order to
keep working with, and in, Formal Methods,
allowing me to continue the research in the context of the Grand Challenge.
My thesis subject is ***, which includes
building formal models of a informal specification and it's correction
verification.

Under Professor ***'s supervision I have done research on the
possibility to use different tools for different aspects of the formal
development and verification of software.
Which lead to a paper submitted and, presented by me, on the ***
Workshop at the *** symposium.

The contact with researchers from all over the world made me want to keep
doing research on Formal Methods, and push the Grand Challenge initiative
further with my contribution.

In 2007 I was invited to join a development team, as a junior developer, to
design and build an information system for the "*** *** ***" (***).
From November/2007 to May/2008 I worked at the *** facilities together with
domain experts to design and build the software system, while maintaining the
research related with my MSc studies at the university.

I believe that through Formal Methods one can achieve true engineering
concepts for software correction by construction, and that, due to the
overwhelming expansion of software applications, not only critical systems
should be proven safe and correct.

Nowadays software is embedded in almost every system we use, and in most
cases,
the producers os these artifacts not only don't provide warranty, but will
relieve themselves from any obligation with disclaimer notices.

Formalizing software development, as other engineering driven development
communities have done in the past, will give it scientific grounds to hold on,
and probably increase its quality.

Kind Regards,

***

Re: Motivation letter for the Master program

Abil — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 12:39:41 GMT

Dear Madam or Sir,

With this letter I would like to apply for **at ***starting in September 2008. ~~I am taking this step as the culmination of a very important key period of my life.~~ This summer I successfully completed my Bachelor in âManagement of organizationsâ program with a specializationÂ in âManager of tourism industryâ in ****

From childhood I have a lot of hobbies: traveling, reading, listening to the music, singing, ~~and~~ etc. In school my favorite subjects were languages, history and geography. When I was traveling with my family we I stayed in different hotels, and ~~one day Iâve realized that hospitality sphere , this is what I like, what I want to do and where I want to work.~~ in this way I had naturally developed an interest in tourism industry. ~~This fact impelled me to enter~~ Eventually, I got admitted into one of the best universities in Ukraine and ~~study~~ studied management of tourism. ForÂ the two years I have been working in with the **~~first~~ the bestÂ known international hotel in Ukraine. ~~Now I completely understand~~ I am well aware that hospitality industry is changing all the time, ~~hotels are like living organisms that is why as~~ requiring a good manger ~~you need to~~ who will know how to solve problems, ~~how~~ to organize peopleÂ and to take ~~what~~ steps to make the business profitable. ~~for the profit of the enterprise and industry.~~ I do believe that taking good care of the customers, catering to their needs and showing respect to their emotions are some of the best traits of a good manager in this field. I~~n my opinion the process of âtaking care of peopleâ, bringing them pleasure, receiving positive emotions and references is so pleasant and absolutely incomparable to any production process.~~

There are many specific reasons why I want to study in the *** and at **By reading brochures, surfing through the Internet, watching familiarizing movies, (coming on the open date, speaking with alumni = what did you mean by this. This makes not sense.) I came ~~got~~ to know about the program. (I like the *** for its coziness, internationality, stability, high traditional values and culture.= I fail to make out what you have meant by it) The reason why I am applying for the course is that it will help me ~~My clear aims of education there are:~~ to receive a high-quality Masters degree, to get a respectable, high-paidÂ and prestigious job in one of the international hotel chains or to become a General Manager of ~~a big~~ an internationally reputed hotel. ; to get in touch with many people, to be coached by professional tutors, to feel myself confident, to be responsible for my own future. It is leading hotel school of the world and is considerate to be the heart of hospitality. In addition I like the fact that a lot of presentations and on-campus recruitments are held there it gives an opportunity to be hired by worldwide company.

I belive I am a ~~open-minded,~~ honest, easy-going and cheerful person. ~~My attitude to education is decisive, in all my acts Iâm trying to be maximum clear and logical.~~ I have good experience in organizing customers in a reliable, responsible and helpful manner. a~~m able to organize people and I am always trying to be reliable, responsible and helpful. I adore association with different people; strongly believe in long-lasting friendship~~. I am sure that âentrepreneurial learningâ concept will develop ~~reveal~~ my skills ~~I want to be responsible for my progress~~.

Finally, I do believe ~~think~~ that the Master program of *** will give me immense opportunity to gain first hadn experience about the European way of providing hospitality. ~~seems to be the best for gaining the European experience of hospitality, excellent place to start my career as well as to meet many interesting people.~~

Please find enclosed my CV, diploma with marks, application form and references.

I greatly appreciate your kind ~~efforts~~ consideration and I am looking forward to hearing from you.

..

You should have mentioned the name of the course. Too manyÂ adjectivesÂ makeÂ any sentence bad. Try to write as simple as possible.

I hope someone expert in your field will comeÂ andÂ makeÂ furtherÂ necessaryÂ corrections.

Motivation letter for the Master program

iLoveUkiev — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 08:57:52 GMT

Please help-help!!!
Dear ladies and gentelmen i need your help with my motivation letter please check!!!

Dear Madam or Sir,

With this letter I would like to apply for ****at ***starting in September 2008. I am taking this step as the culmination of a very important key period of my life. This summer I successfully completed my Bachelor in âManagement of organizationsâ program with a specialization âManager of tourism industryâ in ****

From childhood I have a lot of hobbies: traveling, reading, listening to the music, singing and etc. In school my favorite subjects were languages, history and geography. When I was traveling with my family we stayed in different hotels, and one day Iâve realized that hospitality sphere , this is what I like, what I want to do and where I want to work. This fact impelled me to enter one of the best universities in Ukraine and study management of tourism. For two years I have been working in the ****first international hotel in Ukraine. Now I completely understand that hospitality industry is changing all the time, hotels are like living organisms that is why as a good manger you need to know how to solve problems, how to organize people, what steps to make for the profit of the enterprise and industry. In my opinion the process of âtaking care of peopleâ, bringing them pleasure, receiving positive emotions and references is so pleasant and absolutely incomparable to any production process.

There are many specific reasons why I want to study in the *** and at **By reading brochures, surfing through the Internet, watching familiarizing movies, coming on the open date, speaking with alumni I got to know the program. I like the *** for its coziness, internationality, stability, high traditional values and culture. My clear aims of education there are: to receive high-quality Master degree, to get respectable, high-paid, prestigious job in the international hotel chain or to become a General Manager of a big hotel ; to get in touch with many people, to be coached by professional tutors, to feel myself confident, to be responsible for my own future. It is leading hotel school of the world and is considerate to be the heart of hospitality. In addition I like the fact that a lot of presentations and on-campus recruitments are held there it gives an opportunity to be hired by worldwide company.

I am open-minded, honest, easy-going, cheerful person. My attitude to education is very decisive, in all my acts Iâm trying to be maximum clear and logical. I am able to organize people and I am always trying to be reliable, responsible and helpful. I adore association with different people; strongly believe in long-lasting friendship. I am sure that âentrepreneurial learningâ concept will reveal my skills I want to be responsible for my progress.

Finally, I think that Master program of *** seems to be the best for gaining the European experience of hospitality, excellent place to start my career as well as to meet many interesting people. Please find enclosed my CV, diploma with marks, application form and references.

I greatly appreciate your kind efforts and I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

Pls edit my motivation letter for master course !it's so urgent

chocopie — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 03:44:08 GMT

Hi all!
I have to write a motivation letter to apply for MMSS course ( Master of Marketing, sales, service) tomorrow.By chance, i know about this forum and i see that all members are very enthusiastic and kind to help our English.So i decide to ask for your help to edit my application letter.This is my letter:

June 24th,2008
Dear Sir/Madam,
According to the information for admission the new course of CFVG on the website http:// cfvg.org, I am writing to apply to the MMSS program of CFVG- the 18th intake.
I have graduated from Banking University in 2006 and now I have been working at VietNamairlines as representative.During 2 years, I learned a lot knowledge and skills of customer services and marketing also .However, I think that in the global economics, learning more specialized knowledge is very important and necessary and it will become a basic foundation to help me to catch up with economic development.
I believe the MMSS program of CFVG is a wonderful environment and an opportunity for me to learn good knowledge on marketing, sales, service and to achieve my career objectives.
I should be grateful if you give my application a serious consideration.My enclosed curriculum-vitae describes my qualification in detail.And further information will be supply upon your request.
I am looking forward to joining your MMSS program.
Your sincerely,

English is my second language so i can make mistake.Hope receiving your help.Thanks all ^ ^

Re: Need Your Helps about a Traning Program..

iLoveUkiev — Tue, 24 Jun 2008 16:57:30 GMT

Please help-help!!!
Dear ladies and gentelmen i need your help with my motivation letter please check!!!

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Dear Madam or Sir,

There are many specific reasons why I want to study in the Netherlands and at **By reading brochures, surfing through the Internet, watching familiarizing movies, coming on the open date, speaking with alumni I got to know the program. I like the Netherland for its coziness, internationality, stability, high traditional values and culture. My clear aims of education there are: to receive high-quality Master degree, to get respectable, high-paid, prestigious job in the international hotel chain or to become a General Manager of a big hotel ; to get in touch with many people, to be coached by professional tutors, to feel myself confident, to be responsible for my own future. It is leading hotel school of the world and is considerate to be the heart of hospitality. In addition I like the fact that a lot of presentations and on-campus recruitments are held there it gives an opportunity to be hired by worldwide company.

I greatly appreciate your kind efforts and I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

Motivation Letter - In need of an opinion.

Xionor — Thu, 05 Jun 2008 02:56:25 GMT

Hello. I am applying for a Bachelor's Degree, and I've read most topics here about writing a Motivation Letter, and this is my go at it. Please post your opinions of it, and possibly what needs changing. Cheers!

P.S. (I hope it looks decent here. I wrote it in Word)

Dear Sir/Madame,

I am writing to you with a request to be accepted into the Bachelorâs International Business & Management Studies programme.

I have just finished High School at <School Name> in <Town> and I am planning on moving to <Country>, where I plan to settle and keep living after my education is completed.

It has always been my dream and goal to have my own business, like my mother's, and I think the International Business & Management Studies programme at <School Name> would be the best place for me to start working towards that goal. From your website, and from my friendsâ descriptions, I have gotten an idea of <School Name> as a place with a very multicultural and international environment, which is something I look very much forward to experiencing. My best friend and his family live in <Town> and my girlfriend is studying at <Town>âs University of Arts, and I have also heard that the town is very nice, thus I believe <Town> is the perfect place for me to conduct the study towards my career.

After I've gotten my Bachelor's Degree, I plan on continuing my studies with a Masterâs Programme, in a similar field of study, which I have not yet decided.

I believe I have all it takes to start a career such as having my own business. During my life and my time spent in High School I have developed an ability to organize people and work well together with them on various projects or mutual interests. I am very dedicated and very hard working and I will go to great lenghts to achieve my goal, and meet the expectations set upon me. I have already had some minor business experience, handling various tasks and positions at my motherâs firm, understanding how such an environment works, what to expect of it and how to deal with the various problems it presents.

I consider <School Name> the perfect place for me to conduct my studies and I believe I have what <School Name> looks for, thus I hope my request will be fulfilled.

Thank you very much for considering my application.

Sincerely, <My Name>

Phd letter

zakineo — Mon, 02 Jun 2008 14:11:19 GMT

Hello everbody i am a new member and this is my second message,so i salute you all, i have some problemes due to my poor english in writing a Phd motivation letter that i want to send directly to proffessors, i will be thankfull for your suggestions and i m sending you a letter that i have written and i need somone to see the corrections needed. thank you for this great space .

Dear Sir

The purpose of this letter is not only to describe my educational and professional background, but also to focus your attention on how motivated I am to start PhD programme in [] offered by your laboratory at [].

I graduated with an Master's Research Degree in Computer Science, Telecommunication and Engineering from the National Higher School of Computer Science and Systems Analysis at Mohammed V University (the first engineering school in Morocco), in 2004 I obtained a Bachelor's in Computer Science at the faculty of science of Mohammed V University in Rabat and in 2002 I finished a university degree in Mathematics and physics in Mohammed I university in Oujda.

Actually I am working as a Networking engineer in Morocco Telecommunication after nearly 1 year in Alcatel-Lucent working as an Intelligent Networks Engineer at Moroccan R&D research centre, and I am preparing myself to pursue a PhD in [].

The master of research Iâve studied was a preparation for multidisciplinary research, based on physics, electronics, mathematical, and computational background. We were introduced to gain insight into research works in several topics of engineering; information theory, telecommunication and other fields. And I was always capable of providing an intense effort of adaptation and learning to successfully manipulate new notions and techniques.

I am Aware of the challenge represented by choosing [] in terms of need for adaptation to new tools and manners of research; however I believe in my ability and will to point my scientific background and experience in such a multidisciplinary and promising research area, a choice that fits best my objectives and ambitions.

As [] University has important research activities in this area, I would like to be given the opportunity to be one of its prestigious research groups. I am sure that my passion to computer science related research fields, along with my skills, knowledge and competence would make me a valuable member of your research team, Hence I would appreciate if you consider my application for developing a PhD under your supervision.

I am at your service for further information and clarifications, and I look forward to hearing from you.

Motivation letter to trainee program - Draft

Anonymous — Wed, 28 May 2008 19:56:27 GMT

Could you help me on my motivation letter, I would be very pleased, any suggestion is welcome.

Thank you

Carl

Dear Sir or Madam,
May 28, 2008

I would like to work at GLE because I believe that would be not only a pleasure but also a great opportunity to initiate my career in a truly international environment and enhance my knowledge and skills gained during studies on the university. Being part of a trainee program has always been part of my career plan as I believe this kind of program offers an opportunity to young engineers like me to develop their talent and be recognized as future leaders.

I am an enterprising and hard-working person. During my studies at Federal University of Santa Catarina I have worked as a scientific researcher on Computational Fluid Dynamics simulations at Integrated Technologies Laboratory. I also have spent 3 months in Valencia-Spain in an international internship program at TB S.A. where I had the opportunity to interact with students from many different countries and enhance my knowledge in Spanish and English.

I am a sailor and have participated on major national yacht racing competitions and working for a company with such strong link with sea would be plus on my career.

In my opinion, the most important factor to get promoted and be noticed among many high skilled young people, which is needed to find a rewarding job, is acquired practical experience. That is why I spend a lot of free time on exploring and improving knowledge, this often exceeds beyond my education program.

I hope the information given above will convince you of my diligence and good skills I could utilize as a future leader at GLE.

Yours faithfully,