By Motivational Letter, Commas

Hi, It's OK for you to submit this letter to a Belgian university in English? Please read carefully to pick up my small suggestions, eg commas. =========== indent the start of your paragraphs Dear Sir: I wish to apply as a transfer student to the bachelor program offered...

Hi SabianX, I brushed your essay a bit but mind you, I'm not a native. It's not a good idea to start a letter with 'having completed'.Ok, here we go: ____________________________________________________ Dear Sir or Madam, ...