By Nouns, Motivation letters

Dear Sir/Madam, It was unimaginable for one of the scholarships that is provided offered by Leeds University. I am very ambitious to pursue a career of academic research, and I sincerely hope that my personal qualities and educational experience will be sufficient for you to consider me an...

This is a new approach to a motivational letter. I couldn't begin to say whether that is better than a traditional letter or not a good idea. So, if you want to go with this more creative style (and I'm not saying you are wrong) here are my comments. Check your spelling - ou have one or two...

Hello, Here are a few ideas. I am being fairly picky (critical) because you asked for comments. I understood most of your letter very well. Good luck with your application! --------------------- Dear Sirs, (If you are sure that only men will read your letter, this is fine. If it is possible...

Hello Bensou, and welcome to English Forums. The following words and phrases need repair: providing thanks of organization perfect -- this is a good word, but unbelievable; choose another although a new surrounding -- should be plural, but is not a point to be put forward in a motivation letter...