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Hello: I am new to the site (was led here by a search engine) and am surprised to see a number of grammatical errors in and around the site in general. I haven't looked everywhere, but below you will find a list of the ones that I noticed right off the bat: The site mistakenly uses, in...

Mimoi2 wrote: Does anyone have any suggestions for this motivation letter? Anything would be really appreciated! Name Address1 Address2 Phone Date To Whom It May Concern: I would put a comma after the Concern rather than the semi-colon. With this...

Hello, I am Richard, a Dutch undergraduate student applying for a Masters programme in London, England. As a part of the application form, I have to give 'further information' , which I interpreted as roughly analogous to a letter of motivation: " 9. Further Information Please state your...

You have problems with determiners, plurals, verb tenses, prepositions and general grammatical structure. I've corrected the first paragraph for you and highlighed problems in the second. In the second paragraph you have started inserting a space before commas, which is incorrect. The...

Hi, It's OK for you to submit this letter to a Belgian university in English? Please read carefully to pick up my small suggestions, eg commas. =========== indent the start of your paragraphs Dear Sir: I wish to apply as a transfer student to the bachelor program...

Hi Nadja, Nice use of expressions in this essay. Here are some corrections. There are one or two places where a word in your original is not necessary, though there is nothing wrong with using it. I have indicated these by putting square brackets around the word. Let me know if you don’t...

What Nona said, except with these additions: I don't think the four species relates to their lack of fear of humans, but it's set up that way. You can make them seperate sentences. Or you can include that bit of information elsewhere in the paragraph, such as by saying "The four species...

Forgive me, but what do you mean by a “dash.” All the examples here show two hyphens. These are not dashes. There are three types of dashes, namely Hyphens, Em Dashes and En Dashes The hyphen is the shortest of the three and is used most commonly to combine words (compounds such as...

Hi! You use both the British and the American spelling. Be consequent: use either the British one or the American one. I've used the British spelling for my corrections as that is what you used in the first paragraphs Good luck! Judging from your essay, I would say that your chances to be...

This letter is well written, and your English is good. But I did spot a few mistakes. And many of your sentences are too long, you need to use more commas and fullstops. In the second paragraph: "...my future plans of seeking a carrier in an international organization.." The word is career...