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how can such massacare happen with 100% zero details? it couldnt happen because greek minority is hardly past 70,000(today), the time frame youre refering it could have been what 30,000? but really, show us refrences, concentration camps name the "destroyed" villages(you claim 200, so...

SUGAR AND BLOOD: SLAVERY IN TWO WORLDS BY: ROLANDO CASELLA Between the early 1790s and the early 1820s, there was a difference in the way that slaves from the US and Brazil were treated. The slaves developed lawsuits against their masters in which, they argued for their right to be free. This...

and an additional 1000 Egyptian and 1000 Saudi lives Amongst other horrors Egypt committed several

To whom , not For whom Colon, not comma after concern for the patent , not for patent spell out small numbers: three in a good , not within good to European, not at European no hyphen: North American no capitals: the construction site gained in not gained into the no...

In modern English, 'who' works as both a subject and an object. ++ http://pinker.wjh.harvard.edu/articles/media/1994_01_24_thenewrepublic.html The first story was a nonpartisan analysis of supposed pronoun case errors made by the two candidates in the 1992 US presidential election....

Here you go, Daniela-- I have tweaked it one more time: My name is Daniela Diaz. I was born to Alejandra Perez and Jaime Diaz in Madrid, Spain on October 29, 1985. When I was 9 years old, my mother moved to the United States in order to start a better life for her family. The plan was for...

Thank you very much for your help MrPedantic and Mister Micawber. I used the suggestions of both of you to try to improve my essay. Also, I changed the first paragraph and included more about my background info. Please tell me if there's anything else I should change. In the last...

Hi Daniela, Your essay is quite good. I am going to begin by going through it quickly and cutting out the redundancies and irrelevancies. It will look a little ragged afterwards, so you will have to smooth it out again. I will add some additional notes afterwards: 'My name is Daniela...

Hello everyone: I wrote an essay for my college application, can anyone please check it and tell me if there is something that I might have to change? I won't feel offended or anything like that because English is my second language and I usually make a lot of mistakes. Here are the...