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I am a motivated and curious 20-year-old interactive design student from Vilnius, Lithuania. I am excited to be applying for an internship in your company with the possibility of joining your team where I can apply my skills, talents, and enthusiasm. I visited the web site of...

Hello, I found ideal company in Munich and I really want to get my intership there. However, I am not sure the following paragraph (an email to hiring manager) makes sense or not. I need a fresh look of expert on it. Please check it for me for any grammatical mistake,...