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I have finished my letter of motivation for an International Business Program application. But as i have never written one before i am not sure if i did it the right way. Would someone please have a look at it and give me some advices to improve it? Many thanks in advance. Cookey Dear...

Hello, i want to apply to university and have to hand in a letter of motivation. I have been working on this first version for a while. I started with some brainstorming and wrote down all the things that interested me, what i have done before, what i want to achieve and also asked my friends to...