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Sorry, there's a problem with the former posted entry! There Is No "Together" In Jerusalem For Jews and Muslims, Jerusalem has been a city of hope and loss. It has been their homeland but also their battlefield. Its history has been filled with great joy but also with...

I have no ideas about the content or the organization of focused points. I just have some suggestions on word choices, expressions and grammar. The highlighted lines include possible problems and the red words are my suggestions to improve the writing. Hope that it'll be useful! There Is...

In these different constructions, different types of things are ellipted. 1) My father bought me a cell phone which is as small as a mouse. . Fish is the direct object of caught . Many is an adjective modifying fish , and the first as is an adverb modifying many . Again, the second as is a...

I'm not sure what guideline you have heard, Kolndom-- I am aware of no particular 'clause' (I think you mean conjunction or conclusive phrase ) that need be put at the end of a body paragraph (this would make the sequence of paragraph endings rather boring). You must simply complete the...

Hello s/h Having read a number of books in my time. ] This clause doesn't make a sentence on its own. none have accomplished ] Some examiners would expect 'none has' here. The tale is written in the first-person narrative] 'narrative' is unnecessary. an ordinary girl placed under...

Question I: Number (2) has too many 'what's, and 'gonna' is unacceptable except in slovenly spoken language. Number (3) would only be useful in limited contexts: 'you never know what happens next until after you've seen the movie'. (1) and (4) are fine are fine for general use, as is...

I would have used a comma before the final "and" or "or" in a series, like this: mother, and lesbian church, or community You need "losing parental custody" -- one "o" in "losing". I think you need a more parallel structure than "as an activist and through faith", maybe "through faith and...