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hi, it's my essay for uni ... but im really bad at grammars and writing... so could you please check and correct or point out the problems or mistakes for me.. by the way it's about semiotic analysis... thanks ! Advertising is a form of communication that typically aims to persuade...

HELLO! CAN YOU PLEASE CHECK MY ESSAY ACCORDING TO SEA PARAGRAPHS (sTATEMENT, eVIDENCE, aNALYSE)? “How does Hitchcock create Suspense and shock?” Alfred Hitchcock is known as the ‘master of suspense’ and a great innovator. He has three films in the Top Ten of the American Film...

Hello. 　I'm a Japanese man, and I am planning to study abroad. This is my first time to post my essay here. I would be most grateful if you could point out and correct errors of grammar, expression, logic, and so on, in my essay. I wrote this essay for TOEFL, so please take it...

Sorry, there's a problem with the former posted entry! There Is No "Together" In Jerusalem For Jews and Muslims, Jerusalem has been a city of hope and loss. It has been their homeland but also their battlefield. Its history has been filled with great joy but also with...

I have no ideas about the content or the organization of focused points. I just have some suggestions on word choices, expressions and grammar. The highlighted lines include possible problems and the red words are my suggestions to improve the writing. Hope that it'll be useful! There Is...

There Is No "Together" In Jerusalem For Jews and Muslims, Jerusalem has been a city of hope and loss. It has been their homeland but also their battlefield. Its history has been filled with great joy but also with tragedy. In Hebrew, the name "Jerusalem"...

Could someone please help me with this argumentative essay? I have to write an argumentative essay against cosmetic surgery. Could someone please look if there are mistakes (grammar mistakes, vocabulary mistakes, logical mistakes), if the text is well-structured, if everything in the text is...

Thanks for tour kindness, Barbara. May I go on with questions? 1. What if the list were part of an essay instead of a presentation? Would you use punctuation marks in this case? If the answer is yes, which type? 2. I googled "nature reserves" and "natural reserves" (language=english) :...

Hi Crazy-- I finally got here. I have added some comments in brackets after underlined 'problems': Do Sports and Drugs Mix? Since the dawn of time years while playing football and was the quarter back of our team. Everyone thought he was going to make it to the NFL but during our...

Hi julielai Thank you very much for checking my essay. I have still some doubts. I have corrected my essay according to your notes. I have changed some of the expressions and I add some notes explaining why I use them in this context after checking them in my dictionary. Thank you for...