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The question is: Today people in different countries can see the same movies, watch the same TV programs and follow the same fashions. To what extent do you think this is a positive development? Following is my essay. As the technology is advancing, movies, TV programs and fashion are...

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Is this life quite long, so there is a need to shrink it? Most people don’t think so. However a great deal of people does bad habits harms their life and health. Nowadays many researches have confirmed the strong link between tobacco and cancers, but the number of smokers still very high. The...

I'm taking the IELTS (General) in September. I'm trying to prepare myself for the test, and I'd like to ask for your help guys. Hopefully you can correct my essay. Here is the description of the writing task: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business,...

Hi, I am posting another essay. Again, it is for my personal improvement for my future IELTS exam. My exam is scheduled on March 31, 2007. So I am describing some tables, graphs etc. Hope you will understand my request and check my essay for any grammatical mistakes. If you were an examiner, what...

This is an IELTS essay. Please help me to improve it. Thank you ! According to recent reports, it seems to be that automobiles are responsible for many deaths and serious injuries each year. The primary purpose of this essay is to provide some solutions that encourage people using...

Dear forum visitors, I have already posted this in some other forums but I think it is not so ugly to consider it my little contribution to your English writing community. Seems as though most of you are bored with reading ready essay samples accompanied with help-me-correct-this appeals....

Hi, this post is a little long maybe. Sorry to those of you with limited time to get exactly the right information quickly. Next time, I’ll just post a typical college essay; no chat! In my previous post, I wrote a short informative essay. It’s maybe good enough for a middle-school student...

Firstly, I want to send my gratituds to Jako and Rob for correcting my previus essay. Then is my next homework about a graph showed in the page 71 of the Insight into IELTS Book. The graph shows the fluctuation of Harry’s annual sales of hamburguers, month by month, over 1998.According to...