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Hi, Heres my essay, any critiques are welcom. Basically i need someone to edit (spelling, gremmar, ect.). Also tell me what you think about it. is this a good addmisions essay? I have no idea what an Institute like this expects from applicants. However, to me this is a very good essay....

Heres my essay, any critiques are welcom. Basically i need someone to edit (spelling, gremmar, ect.). Also tell me what you think about it. is this a good addmisions essay? Thank you My whole life I never felt like I could relate to anybody. Growing up I was always thinking about the...

Hi all, I am a student from New Zealand studying Measure for Measure by Shakesphere and we have to write a formal essay going beyond the text. Here is the question Context/setting: This activity may be used as an extension to the study of a text. Students will develop an essay...

Dear Mister Micawber I heartly thank you for your effort to correct my lengthy letter. I have cut short my essay by reducing one paragraph as per your suggestion. Kindly check my letter and suggest me Micawber. I am very eager to hear from you! Regards Shanawaz Mohammed Statememt of Purpose I am...

This is your essay after checking grammar and spelling. "There are numerous debates about the issue whether or not accept equal number of male and female students at school. Therefore some people suggest that every subject should have balanced number of different gender. In my opinion, it...

Hi again Freya, You are working hard on this. It's hard to give you general overall comments on this essay, because I know nothing about you, eg your age /level of education, level of English. I've highlighted again and made a few comments. Best wishes, Clive Life is like a box of...

Hi Nik, This looks like a good essay. Some of the language is quite complicated. Have you based it on the newspaper article? Or is it all your own work? I have tidied it up as below, where I have added extra words I have put these in bold. Watch your spelling though, including the word...

Hi! You use both the British and the American spelling. Be consequent: use either the British one or the American one. I've used the British spelling for my corrections as that is what you used in the first paragraphs Good luck! Judging from your essay, I would say that your chances to be...

hi, please help me and correct any grammar/spelling mistakes The Lord of War During the last decade we saw a major rise at the global terror, the growth at the global terror couldn’t be succeed if it didn't have the exact equipment, this essay going to explain the main reason for the...

This was interesting to read, Koldnom. I think that your structure is basically sound, your ideas good, and your examples appropriate. First you need to proofread the essay, because there are a number of typographical spelling errors. Check also the spelling of proper names.