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HELLO! CAN YOU PLEASE CHECK MY ESSAY ACCORDING TO SEA PARAGRAPHS (sTATEMENT, eVIDENCE, aNALYSE)? “How does Hitchcock create Suspense and shock?” Alfred Hitchcock is known as the ‘master of suspense’ and a great innovator. He has three films in the Top Ten of the American Film...

Highlighted a few things for you to fix. Your long sentences need work. I suggest you keep your sentences short. Anonymous wrote: In the last 100 years, technological advancements allowed (tense?) people to complete more tasks in less time and with less energy. It has changed...

Dear Mister Micawber I heartly thank you for your effort to correct my lengthy letter. I have cut short my essay by reducing one paragraph as per your suggestion. Kindly check my letter and suggest me Micawber. I am very eager to hear from you! Regards Shanawaz Mohammed Statememt of Purpose I am...

Ghai_prince13 wrote: 14.1 topic:::: 14.1. To you there have arrived friends from other city (Sounds redundant. Rephrase. I can't even understand what this means) . Simultaneously , your close friend invites you to go together with it him/her on rest for some days: 1) Explain to it...

The following problem came up in class today: None of us was/were able to communicate with the alien. Now, I was taught to find the head subject and then form the verb according to the number of this head subject, but here I am not sure whether none of modifies us (> were) or of us modifies...

Hi Ngocternal! Be consistent with your tenses and agreements. Just my two cents though. Feel free to toss them. :-) Title: The Effects of The Living Wage Law A living wage rate is a wage sufficient for a worker and family to subsist comfortably (semantic conflict?) . However,...

I a French student. I would be grateful if someone could review this Toefl essay I wrote. Thank you Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Living in a big city has greater advantages than living in a small town or in the country People who disagree with this statement...

Hi, I was just wondering if someone could please look over my essay and perhaps make any suggestions. Thank you Autobiographical Essay – “Marco Polo” Embedded in a web of intense heat stretching itself over my soft flesh, the warm thermal energy from the glowing sun seeping in...

Hi MrPedantic, I'm back! I've completed my revision essay. I changed my audience--so all paper. Original version of essay, my instructor's comments, and the final version are below. I would greatly appreciate any feedback. I know it is very long--and sorry about it. So, I don't mind if you...

Hello s/h Looks good to me. A few small comments: Having read a number of books in my time, from the provocative ‘Roots’ to the bittersweet novel ‘Angela’s Ashes’. None has affected me so deeply...] You really need a main verb in the first sentence. You could try something like: 'I've read...