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Hello, Thanks for your quick answer ! I didn't realise my sentences were so short, I corrected them so I hope it is better now. I added numbers to empasis my main points. Could you help me to correct my grammar ? Through History, we’ve seen that American people are proud and want...

You again misunderstood me. But I think this confusion stems from understaning of the term politics. I tried to say even such an organization which doesnt have to do anything regarding to this case (an historical event) can make decisions because of the diaspora.As for Sub-Commission on the...

Hi MrPedantic, I'm back! I've completed my revision essay. I changed my audience--so all paper. Original version of essay, my instructor's comments, and the final version are below. I would greatly appreciate any feedback. I know it is very long--and sorry about it. So, I don't mind if you...