In Numbers^x, Medical English^x

Hallo everyone, I used to live in England (when I was 11), I now live in the Netherlands. I have a question, im translating a letter for my work experiance. Can you all just have a quick look at the letter and if there are any real big misstakes just note them? I know its quite alot, but I...

Hi, Liz: I am a Nursing Instructor in Canada who teaches English for Nurses and Medical Personnel on the side (as my private business). I have a number of strong opinions about who should teach English for Medical Purposes and who should not. I think you will absolutely qualify as soon as you...