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HEREWITH MY SECOND DRAFT OF MOTIVATION LETTER, COULD EVERYONE READ IT AND GIVE ME ADVICE? THANK A LOT FOR YOUR ATTENTION MOTIVATION STATEMENT Dear Madam/Sir, My name is Rusmana. With this letter I would like to introduce my candidature as a staff of Ministry of Marine Affairs and...

HERE WITH I SEND MY MOTIVATION LETTER (SECOND EDITION). WOULD YOU LIKE HELP ME TO READ IT AND GIVE ME A COMENT? MOTIVATION STATEMENT Dear Madam/Sir, My name is Rusmana. With this letter I would like to introduce my candidature as a staff of Ministry of Marine Affairs and Fisheries...