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Hi all! I have written this to the best of my ability. I'm pretty secure about the language part, as I'm bilingual, but it's the culture part that I want to check works. Some stuff I need to put in there, like the reason for the GPA - it's part letter, part appeal. But, this is...

Hi, You need to organize what you want to say into a number of shorter paragraphs, each dealing with a particular point that you want to make. Try that, and repost if you want to, OK? Best wishes, Clive

Hi, I've made quite a number of edits for you to look at. I'm not sure exactly what the name of this university is. Some have special names, 'eg 'The University of Toronto', while others are simple, eg 'Bristol University'. What does it say on their website. Can you just call it 'Erasmus...

Mimoi2 wrote: Does anyone have any suggestions for this motivation letter? Anything would be really appreciated! Name Address1 Address2 Phone Date To Whom It May Concern: I would put a comma after the Concern rather than the semi-colon. With this...

The format is fine in my opinion. There is no rule that everything has to be 3 paragraphs long, that is just a simple format taught to novice essay writers to help them create a basic essay. A paragraph can be a single sentence if appropriate. The main thing to avoid is letting paragraphs get...

Dear Mister Micawber I heartly thank you for your effort to correct my lengthy letter. I have cut short my essay by reducing one paragraph as per your suggestion. Kindly check my letter and suggest me Micawber. I am very eager to hear from you! Regards Shanawaz Mohammed Statememt of Purpose I am...

Ah, I found it myself. Here you are: Statement of Purpose I am currently employed in a position with tremendous opportunity for advancement in Bangalore at Molecular Connections Pvt. Ltd . I have been recognized and lauded for my knowledge of biochemistry, and I enjoy...

Hello everyone!! please check my motivation letter for PhD position, is it wrong to write about my private interests (like location boyfriend in that country, I want to get a PhD vacancy)? I wrote 5th paragraph in in detail cause they asked for relevant research experience. Dear Prof ***, ...

Manager of LLM Program (I doubt it is a manager. You need to check the title.) Faculty of Law XXX University January 10th, 2005 Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing to apply for the LLM (I would not use an abbrevation here. I tend use abbreviations sparingly.) programme. After the...

I haven't been following your progress along as Mountainhiker has, Akb, but the structure and thrust of your presentation seems strong to me. As for content, it looks very good. There are still a number of grammatical errors, and I am not sure how much MH thinks you should correct yourself, so...