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I have struck out unnecessary or inappropriate verbiage, made some corrections (in bold). You may also have to fix the sentence structure to correct for my deletions . February 2, 2008 Director of the Program Department of ABC University of ABC Dear Dr Smith: I am writing to apply for the...

I AM SENDING THE MOTIVATION LETTER AFTER 2-3 DAYS! PLS GIVE YOUR COMMENTS TO MAKE IT ACCURATE N PERFECT! THIS FORUM IS DOIN A GREAT JOB!.... JUST WELDONE! Director of the Program Department of ABC University of ABC February 2, 2008 I am writing to apply for the Master’s Programme in ***. ...

Comments in pink, other problems/errors in yellow. Lots of missing articles here. Good luck with your application though, the structure of your letter looks ok. It is a good idea to state why you want to do this particular course and not all the other human rights courses, and if this is to...

Please give me some feedback on this letter of motivation. I am witting to apply for the postgraduate studies starting in the fall of 2007. I found that the Master’s programme in the Human Rights corresponds well with my future plans in doing practical and legal work for human rights...

Dear sir or madam, Iam writing to apply for the master’s Degree in philosophy of international Health. I learned about this programme through web search and friends who are now studying at your university. My aim is to work and contribute towards the international standard of care and...

Could you please have a look at my motivation letter and provide me with some suggestions, that would be most helpfull! Thank you very much in advance! Kind regards, Astrid Dear Sir/Madam, I am a motivated student at The Hague University of European Studies and about to graduate...