By Numbers, Promotions

(if, for instance "far ... ones" is an excerpt from the book you're quoting)A couple of comments:- It is better not to use contraction in an academic paper.- Avoid ellipsis (.. after promotion) - Attracting new ... is a new sentence. Either you start a new sentence or you make use...

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Hello, Thanks for your quick answer ! I didn't realise my sentences were so short, I corrected them so I hope it is better now. I added numbers to empasis my main points. Could you help me to correct my grammar ? Through History, we’ve seen that American people are proud and...

I have struck out unnecessary or inappropriate verbiage, made some corrections (in bold). You may also have to fix the sentence structure to correct for my deletions.February 2, 2008 Director of the Program Department of ABC University of ABC Dear Dr Smith:I am writing to apply for the Master’s...

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Thank you for your quick response.After serious consideration ,the top administrators of our company have worked out some concret steps to promote your products in Far East ,especially in China,which is outlined specifically as follows: First, our 120 salesmen of 16 national-wide agencies...

Hi, Keep this skill about you for quick promotion. By this sentence, I meant, that keep this sentence for the benefit of you in getting promotion. It's not idiomatic to say 'keep a skill about you'. You might say 'Keep using/showing/developing this skill . . ' In fact, it's rather...

Dear Sir, My name is ___ ___ , a PhD candidate from ___________. I am working on the quality of information in pharmaceutical promotion for my PhD thesis. I am aware of a recent article and some discussions on issues in pharmaceutical promotion published in your newspaper. I am very...

Dear Sir, My name is ___ ___ , a PhD candidate from ___________. I am working on the quality of information in pharmaceutical promotion for my PhD thesis. I am aware of a recent article and discussions on issues in pharmaceutical promotion published in your newspaper. I am very interested to...

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