I have corrected sentences, but I'm not sure if it is correct, can somebody help me and check it out ?: ( I can shorten them, use different words or combine 2 sentences into 1 ) 1.Those big pointed things in Egypt were all built by

I know this posts date a couple years back. But I had pretty much the same doubt just recently. Is there really not a case in which you could start a new line (add a line break) within a same paragraph? (Other than in writing

Hello I need to write a motivation letter for Master studies. My mother tongue is not English as you might have noticed, so I have 2 questions about grammar: 1. can I use no space between the the rows, only double space between the

Hi guys This is my writing, and it's a process paragraph. Please help me correct it and give me some suggestions. I'm not sure whether it is coherent or not... How to throw a surprised birthday party Holding an

Please write your letter and then we will check it. Here is a template that I pulled from the internet to start you off on the right path: Cover Letter Template Contact Information The first section of your cover letter should include

New degree of perfection Amazing! In Russian it sounds pretty good. Now I don't believe russian-english dictionary . I just don't want to use a title like 'A business offer'. It should attract reader's attention. I would

First of all thanks a lot!!! I couldn't imagine that there were so many issues in my letter. Sorry that I wasn't clear enough. I should clarify things a bit before continue. The company I'm writing to is a world-wide organization. In

Grammatical issues aside, I don't like the tone of the opening paragraph much, I'm afraid. To be frank, it sounds patronising. I would cut all the congratulatory stuff and just make a brief and factual statement of your purpose in writing

I'm afraid I inserted myself into Osee's letter problem on another thread. (Disclaimer: I did say at the time that I knew nothing about the visa application process in Canada.) I have visited the website that explains this, and it still

This is a good essay that can be improved. The main suggestion is to state the thesis or theme in the introduction and then be consistent with this theme throughout. In most respects, it seems to be giving instructions and ideas to a reader who