In Paragraphs^x, Essays^x

I hope Clive can respond further to my post.I wonder if in the first paragraph, the author should use "appearanceS" but not "appearance", especially in the second to the last sentence.$0.02

Hi,It's quite long, so I'll just look at the first paragraph.In the essay “There Is No Unmarked Women”, I bet you $10 that you have not quoted this title correctlyDeborah Tannen has written a comparison differentiating between males and females with two terms.<<< The reader of...

I am in the middle of writing a English essay and I am having a problem thinking of another phrase to use besides "In the same way..." at the beginning of a paragraph.I'm horrible at English, but at the same time I really like it. A contradiction I know.Hope someone can help. ...

Hi,Welcome to the Forum.It seems like an essay. I advise you to break it up into paragraphs, to allow the reader to find and follow your reasoning more easily.You might get more responses here, if you do.Best wishes, Clive

You had too many spaces between Leet and ","My grandmother, Julie Lovins, put everything on the line for her job, including her life. She worked for the Leet Psychiatric Clinic in Lexington, Kentucky, and flew to various locations with Dr. Leet, a psychiatrist, to help patients. ...

I must admit I couldn't find much at all for errors in your essay, while I did take four years of English in college I don't consider myself a professional. Although this is what I found, you had too many spaces in the first paragraph. and a few present tense's in the fifth...

In the late 1800’s everyone was on the move. The Chinese were moving east to avoid being persecuted, families were traveling to new lands in search of a better future, the Native Americans were being savagely moved by force, and Mexicans were moving north to raid Southern Texas. Everyone wanted...

It can work this way also: ...the streets were flooded but (the streets were) not (flooded) seriously enough to... having the sense which was stated by me earlier.Many writers have now used one word, a phrase or a clause (or combination of them) as a sentence or...

The part in question is "The streets practically were practically flooded but not serious enough to cause a total flooding or some any tragedy" and you have a point here as 'seriously' will be another adverb modifying the verb 'were flooded' but I used the adjective...

Hi 26TMNTJG2PG, Could you please explain to me why you didn´t correct the indefinite article before the word kids (second paragraph, first line)?I would also write seriously, instead of the word "serious" you used (the latter is only used in informal English - at least as far as I know...)