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Highlighted some glaring errors. You need to be more consistent with your tenses. Jeremychen wrote: Hey guys, I am bad at english. Do you guys mind going through my paragraph correcting the grammar and other mistakes i made, and give me a review thanks Character Chart ...

Hey guys, I am bad at english. Do you guys mind going through my paragraph correcting the grammar and other mistakes i made, and give me a review thanks Character Chart hape="_x0000_s1026"> Sergeant-Major Morris is the catalyst for the story: he brings the monkey's paw to the Whites...

Hi Peaceblinkfriend, I like it. It keeps me wondering what will happen next and I want to read more. I only have a few suggestions. Feel free to ignore them since I'm not exactly an expert around here. The sun was setting. In the heart of the Bachkov Bushes two modestly dressed old men...

It is far too verbose, Javier. Do not use verbiage to fill up space or unduly personalize an essay: an essay is not a one-sided conversation; it is a reasoned, concise and well-prepared statement. Here are your first couple of paragraphs with the unnecessary words edited out: ...