In Paragraphs^x, Football^x, Grammar^x

Right away, it's nearly 11:00 pm. I've just got through replying to a friend , the letter is quite long, so I it took a long time to write. She's Taiwanese, quite nice and very kind. She's extremly curious about Vietnamese culture, activity, attitude with foreigner.......

Right NOW, it's nearly 11:00 pm. I've just gotten through replying to a friend . The messge is quite long, so I have to take a long time. She's Taiwanese, quite nice and very kind. She's very curious about Vietnamese culture, activity, and attitude s about foreigners. She also wants to travel...

Newbie2007 wrote: Please help me correct the grammar of these paragraphs. Thanks so much. Right away,- said my mother (for example)- it's nearly 11:00 pm. I've just got ten through replying to a friend (it's very complicated, it'd better to change it), it was quite long, so I have to...

Please help me correct the grammar of these paragraphs. Thanks so much. Right away, it's nearly 11:00 pm. I've just got through replying to a friend , it's quite long, so I have to take a long time. She's Taiwanese, quite nice and very kind. She's very curious about Vietnamese culture,...

ElevenTattic wrote: I think you'd rather say "Wherever I look, I see her." without "would", because: (apparently) the sentence is about anywhere you look, you can see her, and this kind of sentences is about something that's always or usually happening. "The Present Simple" is used in this...

Many thanks for your suggestions, which certainly improve my paragraph on the dispute over abortion. I have some other doubts. Hope it’s not a “pain in the ass” (I suppose so. will edit this). There is no rush, of course. 1) “I shall begin by briefly presenting Annas’ interpretation of the...

Hello Sextus As it's quite a long paragraph, I've put some suggestions in square brackets. The sq. brackets replace the text in curly brackets. The paragraph breaks are merely for ease of reading, and aren't supposed to be suggestions. Let me know if these edits change your meaning: 9) “{To...