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I have highlighted errors. You use "he" and "your" and "I" so it's not clear who you are talking about. Your capitalization is uneven, and you need to use the past tense.

Please edit my paragraph writing. Thank you for helping me. Introduce Myclassmate The last class I interviewed my classmate His name is Atirach limphaiboon and he nickname is Toon. He is 19 years old. Your birthday is 7th July 1989. He was born in Chiang Rai province and move to Bangkok is a big...

could someone please check it for grammer, paragraph structure and to see whether the sentences are structured correctly. Basically I want to make sure everything is correct. I hope someon can help me, it is a page long though: Ever since I can remember I've always liked sports so when the...

Hi, MountainHiker! I am from China. I met this forum about two months ago and found you are very friendly. Now I want to apply for a PhD position, and I need your help. It would be very helpful. I would highly appreciate your suggestion! Thanks a lot!---By the way, I have registered, but not...