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no a narrative paragraph does not have to tell a true story!!Writing to tell is a narrative paragraph!!example is below:I'm not sure who saw the wasp first, but everybody seemed to start yelling at the same time. Some kids dived under their desks. The heroes went after it with books, papers,...

Hi, I'm learning English as a second language, and a few days a go, I, and my study mates, studied this article I found at a NEWSWEEK.COM.Here's the address of the article. http://www.newsweek.com/id/148925and this is the article we studied. This is little bit long but, Please don't...

The response from the United States of America to Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth IIMessage from Her Majesty the Queen. • Let us start with your header, the use of Majesty. Here is how it is derived: After the fall of Rome, Majesty was used to describe a Monarch of the very highest rank -...

I have highlighted errors. You use "he" and "your" and "I" so it's not clear who you are talking about. Your capitalization is uneven, and you need to use the past tense.

Please edit my paragraph writing. Thank you for helping me.Introduce Myclassmate The last class I interviewed my classmate His name is Atirach limphaiboon and he nickname is Toon. He is 19 years old. Your birthday is 7th July 1989. He was born in Chiang Rai province and move to Bangkok is a...

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Right away, it's nearly 11:00 pm. I've just got through replying to a friend , the letter is quite long, so I it took a long time to write. She's Taiwanese, quite nice and very kind. She's extremly curious about Vietnamese culture, activity, attitude with foreigner.......

Right NOW, it's nearly 11:00 pm. I've just gotten through replying to a friend. The messge is quite long, so I have to take a long time. She's Taiwanese, quite nice and very kind. She's very curious about Vietnamese culture, activity, and attitudes about foreigners. She also wants to travel to...

Newbie2007 wrote: Please help me correct the grammar of these paragraphs. Thanks so much. Right away,-said my mother (for example)- it's nearly 11:00 pm. I've just gotten through replying to a friend (it's very complicated, it'd better to change it), it was quite long, so I have to take a...

Please help me correct the grammar of these paragraphs. Thanks so much. Right away, it's nearly 11:00 pm. I've just got through replying to a friend , it's quite long, so I have to take a long time. She's Taiwanese, quite nice and very kind. She's very curious about Vietnamese culture, activity,...